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You had the correct pronunciation of 杭州, but you are wrong in their tone. You actually pronounced the 杭 in the third tone and the 州 in the second tone. Their right tone is the 杭 in the second tone and the 州 in the first tone. However, you were doing a good job.
Based on what from your message, I know how great the love parents give their children is! They never want to put their children under pressure, no matter what situation they are in, they just suffer in silence, never want to bother their children.
In China, rural cultivated land belongs to collective ownership, and is contracted to farmers for farming without any charges. Not every farmer is qualified to attend our training. They should be specialized in a certain industry and have a certain scale, and other requirements. According to some benefiting farmers' policies, as long as you can meet some specific requirements, you can get some financial subsidies from the government. Additionally, all income from farmland belongs to farmers. So nowadays, being a farmer in China is definitely not a bad thing.
Yes, I am very satisfied with my job and I am glad to do some work helping farmers.
For historical reasons, I never went to college, but I do know some common rules about 高考. When students enter high-schools, they are supposed to be divided into science and liberal arts according to comprehensive situations and their own will. When they get the college entrance exam, they can also choose which major and university to study in. So most of them could choose their favorite majors and university, but if you don't get an ideal score in the exam, you probably have less chance of getting an ideal major and a university. Additionally, I learned that you could change your major during college if you meet certain requirements. Therefore, I think that girl didn't at least tell you about these whole aspects.
Yes, that's my happiest thing too to communicate with you and I have learned a lot from you. I do appreciate all the communications between us, so let's keep it going.

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You had the correct pronunciation of 杭州, but you are wrr tonge in their ts wroneg.

You actually pronounced the inas the third tone and the 州 in州 as the second tone.

Their right tone is the 杭 in the second tone and the 州 in theBut their correct tones are second tone for 杭, and first tone for 州.

However, you were doing a good job.

Based on what from your message, I knowcan tell how great the love parents give their children is!

They never want to put their children under pressure, no matter what situation they are in, because they just suffer in silence,. I never want to bother their children.

I'm not sure if I corrected this right, I assumed you were talking about children in general.

In China, rural cultivated land belongs to a collective ownership, and is contracted out to farmers for farming without any charges.

Not every farmer is qualified to attend our training.

They should be specialized in a certain industry and have a certain scale, and of production, along with other requirements.

According to some policies benefiting farmers' policies, as long as youthey can meet some specific requirements, youthey can get some financial subsidies from the government.

Additionally, allny income fromgenerated on the farmland belongs to the farmers.

So nowadays, being a farmer in China is definitely not a bad thing.

Yes, I am very satisfied with my job and I am glad I am able to do some work to helping farmers.

When students enter high-schools, they are supposed to be divided into science and liberal arts paths according to comprehensive situations and their own will (usually we say performance).

Not sure what you mean by comprehensive situation here, you may need to be more specific.

When they get the college entrance exam, they can also choose which major and university to study inat.

Not sure what you mean by get, do you mean when the write the exam or when they pass the exam, or another meaning?

So most of them could choose their favorite majors and university, but if youthey don't get an ideal score ion the exam, youthey probably have less chance of getting antheir ideal major and a university.

Additionally, I learned that you could change your major during college if you meet certain requirements.

Therefore, I don't think that girl didn't at least tell you about these whole aspecttold you about the all the details of the process.

Yes, that's my happiest thing too to communicate with youcommunicating with you is the happiest thing for me to do too, and I have learned a lot from you.

I do appreciate all the communications between us, so let's keep it going.

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great job, keep it up.

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Jack

Aug. 3, 2021

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They never want to put their children under pressure, no matter what situation they are in, because they just suffer in silence,. I never want to bother their children.

Yes. In general.

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Jack

Aug. 3, 2021

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When students enter high-schools, they are supposed to be divided into science and liberal arts paths according to comprehensive situations and their own will (usually we say performance).

Their grades of each subject, such as foreign language, Chinese, math, chemistry, physics, history, geography, politics and their wishes. Etc.

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Jack

Aug. 3, 2021

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When they get the college entrance exam, they can also choose which major and university to study inat.

Finished the college entrance exam

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Jack

Aug. 3, 2021

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Therefore, I don't think that girl didn't at least tell you about these whole aspecttold you about the all the details of the process.

I don’t think that girl told you about the all the details of the process.

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Jack

Aug. 3, 2021

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Yes, that's my happiest thing too to communicate with youcommunicating with you is the happiest thing for me to do too, and I have learned a lot from you.

Communicating with you is the happiest thing for me to do too

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Jack

Aug. 3, 2021

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Thank you very much for correcting such a long journal for me.

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pringerx

Aug. 4, 2021

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Their grades of each subject, such as foreign language, Chinese, math, chemistry, physics, history, geography, politics and their wishes. Etc.

Got it, I think in this case it would be better to simply write: "depending on their course grades and personal preferences".

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pringerx

Aug. 4, 2021

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Thank you very much for correcting such a long journal for me.

my pleasure!

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Jack

Aug. 4, 2021

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Got it, I think in this case it would be better to simply write: "depending on their course grades and personal preferences".

Thank you very much

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You had the correct pronunciation of 杭州, but you are wrong in their tone.


You had the correct pronunciation of 杭州, but you are wrr tonge in their ts wroneg.

You actually pronounced the 杭 in the third tone and the 州 in the second tone.


You actually pronounced the inas the third tone and the 州 in州 as the second tone.

Their right tone is the 杭 in the second tone and the 州 in the first tone.


Their right tone is the 杭 in the second tone and the 州 in theBut their correct tones are second tone for 杭, and first tone for 州.

However, you were doing a good job.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Based on what from your message, I know how great the love parents give their children is!


Based on what from your message, I knowcan tell how great the love parents give their children is!

They never want to put their children under pressure, no matter what situation they are in, they just suffer in silence, never want to bother their children.


They never want to put their children under pressure, no matter what situation they are in, because they just suffer in silence,. I never want to bother their children.

I'm not sure if I corrected this right, I assumed you were talking about children in general.

In China, rural cultivated land belongs to collective ownership, and is contracted to farmers for farming without any charges.


In China, rural cultivated land belongs to a collective ownership, and is contracted out to farmers for farming without any charges.

Not every farmer is qualified to attend our training.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They should be specialized in a certain industry and have a certain scale, and other requirements.


They should be specialized in a certain industry and have a certain scale, and of production, along with other requirements.

According to some benefiting farmers' policies, as long as you can meet some specific requirements, you can get some financial subsidies from the government.


According to some policies benefiting farmers' policies, as long as youthey can meet some specific requirements, youthey can get some financial subsidies from the government.

Additionally, all income from farmland belongs to farmers.


Additionally, allny income fromgenerated on the farmland belongs to the farmers.

So nowadays, being a farmer in China is definitely not a bad thing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yes, I am very satisfied with my job and I am glad to do some work helping farmers.


Yes, I am very satisfied with my job and I am glad I am able to do some work to helping farmers.

For historical reasons, I never went to college, but I do know some common rules about 高考.


When students enter high-schools, they are supposed to be divided into science and liberal arts according to comprehensive situations and their own will.


When students enter high-schools, they are supposed to be divided into science and liberal arts paths according to comprehensive situations and their own will (usually we say performance).

Not sure what you mean by comprehensive situation here, you may need to be more specific.

When they get the college entrance exam, they can also choose which major and university to study in.


When they get the college entrance exam, they can also choose which major and university to study inat.

Not sure what you mean by get, do you mean when the write the exam or when they pass the exam, or another meaning?

So most of them could choose their favorite majors and university, but if you don't get an ideal score in the exam, you probably have less chance of getting an ideal major and a university.


So most of them could choose their favorite majors and university, but if youthey don't get an ideal score ion the exam, youthey probably have less chance of getting antheir ideal major and a university.

Additionally, I learned that you could change your major during college if you meet certain requirements.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Therefore, I think that girl didn't at least tell you about these whole aspects.


Therefore, I don't think that girl didn't at least tell you about these whole aspecttold you about the all the details of the process.

Yes, that's my happiest thing too to communicate with you and I have learned a lot from you.


Yes, that's my happiest thing too to communicate with youcommunicating with you is the happiest thing for me to do too, and I have learned a lot from you.

I do appreciate all the communications between us, so let's keep it going.


I do appreciate all the communications between us, so let's keep it going.

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