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My department is a public institution which focuses on farmers training in our district. This year we have to train 300 farmers and they belong to different majors, such as fruit planting, vegetable planting, grain and oil production and so on. Of course, there is a ginger plants class this year and the video you saw is that the students of that class were holding their field practice. For every class, there are two sections which are theory learning and field practice, and the second section should take at least half the duration of each class.
You are a good sister and I think everyone would want to have a sister like you. You are so kind, thoughtful and dedicated to your brother, but you shouldn't take care of your brother only by yourself, and you should let his wife and children do some nursing stuff too. I know you must be exhausted because of looking after your brother, so I won't want to write and read more this time, so that you can have a nice period of rest. By the way, have a safe trip to your brother’s house and I will read the Chinese words 杭州 for you. Bye bye.

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My department is a public institution whichthat focuses on farmers training in our district.

This year we have to train 300 farmers and they belong toall have different majors, such asincluding fruit planting, vegetable planting, grain and oil production and so on.

Of course, there is a ginger plantsing class this year and the video you saw is thatof the students of that class were holding their field practice.

For every class, there are two sections which are, theory learning and field practice, and t. The second section should take at least half the duration of each class.

You are a good sister and I think everyone would want to have a sister like you.

You are so kind, thoughtful and dedicated to your brother, but you shouldn't take care of your brother onlyall by yourself, and y. You should let his wife and children dohelp with some nursing stuff too.

I know you must be exhausted because offrom looking after your brother, so I won't want to write and read more this timerite as much this time (I think this is what you mean?), so that you can have a nice period of rest.

By the way, have a safe trip to your brother’s house and I will read the Chinese words 杭州 for you.

Bye bye.

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Jack

July 31, 2021

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My department is a public institution whichthat focuses on farmers training in our district.

Why not which?

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Jack

July 31, 2021

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Thank you very much for correcting me.

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pringerx

Aug. 1, 2021

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Why not which?

Good question, I had to look this up. It seems that this rule is quite nuanced and most native speakers don't even follow it. From what I gathered, if you're using a comma, "which" is preferred. If you're not using a comma, either "which or that" can be used. See the bottom of this page for further explanation: https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/when-to-use-that-and-which

But in your sentence I guess you could use either which or that and either would be correct. I thought "that" sounded more natural so I changed it, but this may be individual taste, so I wouldn't worry too much about it, its all very confusing haha.

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Jack

Aug. 1, 2021

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Thank you very much.

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My department is a public institution which focuses on farmers training in our district.


My department is a public institution whichthat focuses on farmers training in our district.

This year we have to train 300 farmers and they belong to different majors, such as fruit planting, vegetable planting, grain and oil production and so on.


This year we have to train 300 farmers and they belong toall have different majors, such asincluding fruit planting, vegetable planting, grain and oil production and so on.

Of course, there is a ginger plants class this year and the video you saw is that the students of that class were holding their field practice.


Of course, there is a ginger plantsing class this year and the video you saw is thatof the students of that class were holding their field practice.

For every class, there are two sections which are theory learning and field practice, and the second section should take at least half the duration of each class.


For every class, there are two sections which are, theory learning and field practice, and t. The second section should take at least half the duration of each class.

You are a good sister and I think everyone would want to have a sister like you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You are so kind, thoughtful and dedicated to your brother, but you shouldn't take care of your brother only by yourself, and you should let his wife and children do some nursing stuff too.


You are so kind, thoughtful and dedicated to your brother, but you shouldn't take care of your brother onlyall by yourself, and y. You should let his wife and children dohelp with some nursing stuff too.

I know you must be exhausted because of looking after your brother, so I won't want to write and read more this time, so that you can have a nice period of rest.


I know you must be exhausted because offrom looking after your brother, so I won't want to write and read more this timerite as much this time (I think this is what you mean?), so that you can have a nice period of rest.

By the way, have a safe trip to your brother’s house and I will read the Chinese words 杭州 for you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Bye bye.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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