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Today I saw an interesting topic: why people living in the south are shorter than people who live in the north. According to the author's opinion, there are the following respects: firstly, the high latitude area has long nights, so the northerners can sleep longer, while the southerners do the opposite. Secondly, the northern area produces wheat, and wheat has a longer growing period than rice, so wheat is more nutritious. Therefore, northerners mainly eat wheat so that they can be taller than the southerners who mainly eat rice. Thirdly, the north is colder than the south, so people there need to eat more (and mainly eat beef, mutton and milk) to maintain their fat and calories to keep warm and this leads that they are tall and big, while people in the South not only don't need fat and calories to keep warm because of the hot weather there, on the contrary, they need heat dissipation, and a short body is very good for that. Fourthly, people are also animals. Their bodies evolved naturally to adopt the local climate.
Isn’t it very interesting? What is your opinion?

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Today I saw an interesting topic: why people living in the south are shorter than people who live in the north.

According to the author's opinion, there are the following respectasons: firstly, the high latitude areas hasve longer nights, so theresulting in northerners can sleeping longer, while the and southerners do the opposite.sleeping less. (assuming sleeping longer results in taller height)

Secondly, the northern area produces wheat, and wheatwhich has a longer growing period than rice, and thuso wheat is more nutritious. (assuming a longer growing period equates to greater nutrition)

Therefore, northerners mainly eat wheat so that they can b, in effect, are taller than the southerners who mainly eat rice.

Thirdly, the north is colder than the south, so people there need to eat more (andthey mainly eat beef, mutton and milk) to maintain their fat stores and calories to keep warm and this leads that they are, which makes them taller and bigger (assuming eating more of these products equates to being taller and big, while people in the South not only don't need fat and calories to keep warm because of the hot weather there, on the contrary, they neger). In contrast, because of the hot weather in the South, people do not need as much dietary fat and calories to keep warm and rather, would benefit from increased heat dissipation, andsomething a short body is very good for that.

I would try to make shorter sentences to keep your thoughts more clear.
This is an interesting theory but there are a lot of assumptions. For example, I thought a taller stature would mean a larger surface area for heat dissipation (as opposed to a shorter stature)?

Fourthly, people are also animals.

Their bodies evolved naturally to adoapt to the local climate.

Isn’t it very interesting?

What is your opinion?

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Thanks for sharing, very interesting indeed.

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Jack

July 23, 2021

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Thank you very much.

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Today I saw an interesting topic: why people living in the south are shorter than people who live in the north.


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According to the author's opinion, there are the following respects: firstly, the high latitude area has long nights, so the northerners can sleep longer, while the southerners do the opposite.


According to the author's opinion, there are the following respectasons: firstly, the high latitude areas hasve longer nights, so theresulting in northerners can sleeping longer, while the and southerners do the opposite.sleeping less. (assuming sleeping longer results in taller height)

Secondly, the northern area produces wheat, and wheat has a longer growing period than rice, so wheat is more nutritious.


Secondly, the northern area produces wheat, and wheatwhich has a longer growing period than rice, and thuso wheat is more nutritious. (assuming a longer growing period equates to greater nutrition)

Therefore, northerners mainly eat wheat so that they can be taller than the southerners who mainly eat rice.


Therefore, northerners mainly eat wheat so that they can b, in effect, are taller than the southerners who mainly eat rice.

Thirdly, the north is colder than the south, so people there need to eat more (and mainly eat beef, mutton and milk) to maintain their fat and calories to keep warm and this leads that they are tall and big, while people in the South not only don't need fat and calories to keep warm because of the hot weather there, on the contrary, they need heat dissipation, and a short body is very good for that.


Thirdly, the north is colder than the south, so people there need to eat more (andthey mainly eat beef, mutton and milk) to maintain their fat stores and calories to keep warm and this leads that they are, which makes them taller and bigger (assuming eating more of these products equates to being taller and big, while people in the South not only don't need fat and calories to keep warm because of the hot weather there, on the contrary, they neger). In contrast, because of the hot weather in the South, people do not need as much dietary fat and calories to keep warm and rather, would benefit from increased heat dissipation, andsomething a short body is very good for that.

I would try to make shorter sentences to keep your thoughts more clear. This is an interesting theory but there are a lot of assumptions. For example, I thought a taller stature would mean a larger surface area for heat dissipation (as opposed to a shorter stature)?

Fourthly, people are also animals.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Their bodies evolved naturally to adopt the local climate.


Their bodies evolved naturally to adoapt to the local climate.

Isn’t it very interesting?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What is your opinion?


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