Dec. 21, 2020
Journal 21/12/20
I think that environmental protection in America is better than in China. In my opinion, the US has less population and is also one contribution to the fresh air. In China, the places with good air quality are mainly distributed to the northeast, southeast coastal areas and southwest plateau areas. The places with bad air quality are mainly distributed to the mid-northern and northwest parts of China. The city with the best quality is Haikou, and cities surrounding Shijiazhuang usually have bad air quality. As for Anhui Province, Huangshan is the city that has the best air quality. In short, no matter whether it's in Anhui or China, southern cities usually have better air quality than in the northern part.
I think that environmental protection in America is better than iAmerica does a better job with environmental protection than China.
I generally try not to use "America", because that seems very ethnocentric and implies that Central American, South America, and Canada, which are also part of America, do not matter. Try to use the US, so we do not offend our neighbors to the north and to the south.
In my opinion, the US has lessa smaller population and is also one contribution to thewhich contributes to fresh air.
In China, the places with good air quality are mainly distribulocated toin the northeast, southeast coastal areas and southwest plateau areas.
The places with bad air quality are mainly distributed tofound in the mid-northern and northwest partregions of China.
The city with the best air quality is Haikou, andwhereas cities that surrounding Shijiazhuang usually have bad air quality.
As forIn Anhui Province, Huangshan is the city that has the best air quality. is Huangshan.
In short, no matter whether it's in Anhui or China, southern cities in China usually have better air quality than those in the northern part.
Dec. 22, 2020
Thank you very much.
Journal 21/12/20
I think that environmental protection in America is better than in China.
In my opinion, the US has less population and that is also one contributiong factor to the fresh air.
We add "that" to make it clear that you're referring back to the previous statement, "The US has less population".
In China, the places with good air quality are mainly distributed toin the northeast, southeast coastal areas, and southwest plateau areas.
The places with bad air quality are mainly distributed toin the mid-northern and northwest parts of China.
The city with the best quality is Haikou, and cities surrounding Shijiazhuang usually have bad air quality.
As for Anhui Province, Huangshan is the city that has the best air quality.
In short, no matter whether it's in Anhui or China, southern cities usually have better air quality than in the northern part.
Dec. 21, 2020
In China, the places with good air quality are mainly distributed toin the northeast, southeast coastal areas, and southwest plateau areas.
In China, the places with good air quality are mainly distributed in the northeast, along the southeast coast, and in the southwest plateaus.
Dec. 21, 2020
Each item would generally be preceded by the word "the" in this context to make it clear it's a different item in the list. Also, the word "areas" isn't needed, since the "coast" and "plateaus" already indicate an area.
Dec. 21, 2020
In China, the places with good air quality are mainly distributed toin the northeast, southeast coastal areas, and southwest plateau areas.
Each item would generally be preceded by the word "the" in this context to make it clear it's a different item in the list. Also, the word "areas" isn't needed, since the "coast" and "plateaus" already indicate an area.
The places with bad air quality are mainly distributed in the northeast, along the southeast coast, and in the southwest plateaus.
Dec. 21, 2020
Each item would generally be preceded by the word "the" in this context to make it clear it's a different item in the list. Also, the word "areas" isn't needed, since the "coast" and "plateaus" already indicate an area. The places with bad air quality are mainly distributed in the northeast, along the southeast coast, and in the southwest plateaus.
While "the" could be added to make it even clearer that each item is a different item within the list, it's not strictly necessary. Also, while writing "areas" isn't strictly necessary, it's not wrong to say. The sentence, with the correction of "in", is perfectly correct and natural to say. Your corrections are more a matter of style.
Dec. 21, 2020
Thank you very much.
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I think that environmental protection in America is better than in China. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I think that I generally try not to use "America", because that seems very ethnocentric and implies that Central American, South America, and Canada, which are also part of America, do not matter. Try to use the US, so we do not offend our neighbors to the north and to the south. |
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In my opinion, the US has less population and is also one contribution to the fresh air. In my opinion, the US has less population and that is also one contributi We add "that" to make it clear that you're referring back to the previous statement, "The US has less population". In my opinion, the US has |
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In China, the places with good air quality are mainly distributed to the northeast, southeast coastal areas and southwest plateau areas. In China, the places with good air quality are mainly distributed In China, the places with good air quality are mainly |
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The places with bad air quality are mainly distributed to the mid-northern and northwest parts of China. The places with bad air quality are mainly distributed The places with bad air quality are mainly |
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The city with the best quality is Haikou, and cities surrounding Shijiazhuang usually have bad air quality. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The city with the best air quality is Haikou, |
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As for Anhui Province, Huangshan is the city that has the best air quality. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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In short, no matter whether it's in Anhui or China, southern cities usually have better air quality than in the northern part. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In short, |
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