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July 17, 2021

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This is also the first time I have seen ginger plants. Yes, they look like that and they are as big as you see. The ginger we bought in the supermarket is separated, not a whole ginger.
There are ginger harvest machines. On that trip we visited the ginger harvest machine factory, but I forgot to take pictures. As to why that ginger farmer didn't use a machine to harvest his ginger, I really didn't know.
The purpose of this trip is to learn the experience of ginger planting of others. The person who talked to others was not from our school. He is a local ginger planter and he talked to our students about his experience of ginger planting. Yes, the lady who is well dressed is not a farmer. She is a tour guide from a travel company because we entrusted this training to a travel company.
I don't know why you are so energetic, you run a daycare center and do other business. How can you take care of it by yourself? Are those 3000 stuff your skin care products? And just for peeling a few paint from your wall that you get a violation, how can they be so strict? It's incredible.
On the day I got sunburn on my shoulder, I was not really aware of that. I just felt it was really hot, but I didn't expect I would get sunburn. I didn't care about it and didn't give it any treatment. My skin became red and felt pain at first and then a layer of skin fell off.
You can't say that black tea is the best tea. In China, there are many famous brands of tea and there are mostly green teas. I often vomit when I drink green tea, not because the green tea is not good, it's because of my stomach problem, I think. It's said that black tea is fermented tea and it fits well with the stomach.
I don't think it's right to assassinate people, no matter for what reason. People living happily need a stable country, right? I pray for Haiti's president and I condemn the murderer. I think every conflict should be solved in a peaceful way.
This trip to Zhejiang University has a lot of gains. We listened to the speeches of a few professors, visited some new countryside villages and some famous spots in Hangzhou city. I will share it with you afterwards.

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This is also the first time I have seen ginger plants.

Yes, they look like that and they are as big as you see.

The ginger we bought in the supermarket is separatedin pieces, not a whole ginger.

There are ginger harvest machines.

On that trip, we visited the ginger harvest machine factory, but I forgot to take pictures.

As to why that ginger farmer didn't use a machine to harvest his ginger, I really didn't know.

The purpose of this trip is to learn theabout other people's experience ofwith ginger planting of others.

The person who talked to others was not from our school.

He is a local ginger planter, and he talked to our students about his experience of ginger planting.

Yes, the lady who is well dressed is not a farmer.

She is a tour guide from a travel company because we entrusted this training to a travel company.

I don't know why you are so energetic, y. You run a daycare center and do other business.

How can you take care of it by yourself?

Are those 3000 stuffthings your skin care products?

"Stuff" is uncountable.

And you get a violation just for peeling a few paint from your wall that you get a violation, h? How can they be so strict?

"Paint" is uncountable.

It's incredible.

On the day I got a sunburn on my shoulder, I was not really aware of thadidn't realize it.

Or "I got sunburned on my shoulder."

I just felt it was really hot, but I didn't expect I would get sunburn.

I didn't care about it and didn't give it any treatment.

My skin became red and felt painful at first, and then a layer of skin fell off.

You can't say that black tea is the best tea.

In China, there are many famous brands of tea and there are, mostly green teas.

I often vomit when I drink green tea, not because the green tea is not good, it'sbut because of my stomach problem, I think.

It's said that black tea is fermented tea and it fits well with's good for the stomach.

I don't think it's right to assassinate people, no matter for whatthe reason.

People living happily need a stable country, right?

I pray for Haiti's president and I condemn the murderer.

I think every conflict should be solved in a peaceful way.

This trip to Zhejiang University hwas a lot of gainsvery productive.

We listened to the speeches of a few professors,' speeches and visited some new countryside villages and some famous spots in Hangzhou city.

I will share it with you afterwards.

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Jack

July 18, 2021

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Thank you very much. You are very helpful.

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This is also the first time I have seen ginger plants.


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Yes, they look like that and they are as big as you see.


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The ginger we bought in the supermarket is separated, not a whole ginger.


The ginger we bought in the supermarket is separatedin pieces, not a whole ginger.

There are ginger harvest machines.


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On that trip we visited the ginger harvest machine factory, but I forgot to take pictures.


On that trip, we visited the ginger harvest machine factory, but I forgot to take pictures.

As to why that ginger farmer didn't use a machine to harvest his ginger, I really didn't know.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The purpose of this trip is to learn the experience of ginger planting of others.


The purpose of this trip is to learn theabout other people's experience ofwith ginger planting of others.

The person who talked to others was not from our school.


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He is a local ginger planter and he talked to our students about his experience of ginger planting.


He is a local ginger planter, and he talked to our students about his experience of ginger planting.

Yes, the lady who is well dressed is not a farmer.


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She is a tour guide from a travel company because we entrusted this training to a travel company.


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I don't know why you are so energetic, you run a daycare center and do other business.


I don't know why you are so energetic, y. You run a daycare center and do other business.

How can you take care of it by yourself?


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Are those 3000 stuff your skin care products?


Are those 3000 stuffthings your skin care products?

"Stuff" is uncountable.

And just for peeling a few paint from your wall that you get a violation, how can they be so strict?


And you get a violation just for peeling a few paint from your wall that you get a violation, h? How can they be so strict?

"Paint" is uncountable.

It's incredible.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

On the day I got sunburn on my shoulder, I was not really aware of that.


On the day I got a sunburn on my shoulder, I was not really aware of thadidn't realize it.

Or "I got sunburned on my shoulder."

I just felt it was really hot, but I didn't expect I would get sunburn.


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I didn't care about it and didn't give it any treatment.


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My skin became red and felt pain at first and then a layer of skin fell off.


My skin became red and felt painful at first, and then a layer of skin fell off.

You can't say that black tea is the best tea.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In China, there are many famous brands of tea and there are mostly green teas.


In China, there are many famous brands of tea and there are, mostly green teas.

I often vomit when I drink green tea, not because the green tea is not good, it's because of my stomach problem, I think.


I often vomit when I drink green tea, not because the green tea is not good, it'sbut because of my stomach problem, I think.

It's said that black tea is fermented tea and it fits well with the stomach.


It's said that black tea is fermented tea and it fits well with's good for the stomach.

I don't think it's right to assassinate people, no matter for what reason.


I don't think it's right to assassinate people, no matter for whatthe reason.

People living happily need a stable country, right?


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I pray for Haiti's president and I condemn the murderer.


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I think every conflict should be solved in a peaceful way.


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This trip to Zhejiang University has a lot of gains.


This trip to Zhejiang University hwas a lot of gainsvery productive.

We listened to the speeches of a few professors, visited some new countryside villages and some famous spots in Hangzhou city.


We listened to the speeches of a few professors,' speeches and visited some new countryside villages and some famous spots in Hangzhou city.

I will share it with you afterwards.


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