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No matter how strong you are, please admit your weaknesses. No matter how weak you are, please admit your weaknesses. Then the stronger will get stronger and the weaker will get stronger.

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No matter how weak you are, please also admit your weaknesses.

Like below, "also" sets up a more dramatic contrast.

Then the stronger will get stronger and the weaker will also get stronger.

"The strong" = "stronger people" fits with other idioms in my mind. You could also add "also" to accentuate the similarity between outcomes.

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Oct. 6, 2020

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No matter how strong you are, please admit your weaknesses.


No matter how weak you are, please admit your weaknesses.


No matter how weak you are, please also admit your weaknesses.

Like below, "also" sets up a more dramatic contrast.

Then the stronger will get stronger and the weaker will get stronger.


Then the stronger will get stronger and the weaker will also get stronger.

"The strong" = "stronger people" fits with other idioms in my mind. You could also add "also" to accentuate the similarity between outcomes.

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