July 7, 2021
Journal
I looked up Independence Day on the internet and learned that it's the national day of the US. I wish great Americans a happy independent day.
Yes, among the four seasons, summer is the season that rained a lot. During summer, you need to take your clothes outside to dry, otherwise they will go mouldy.
Indeed, money is a good thing, but if making money affects our life quality, I'd rather not earn the money.
The reason why the Chinese government prohibits members of the national staff from owning private business I think is that the government is afraid that the members will distract their focus from their public position. It's not that they may use their authority to influence their business, because they usually don't have any power, they just earn a little hard-earned money by their own hard work.
It's really nice that the US doesn't have any law to prevent civil servants from doing business. If this is true, I really wish I could live in America.
I am very happy to hear that your products are very popular among your customers and I hope your team will do it better.
I am for sure that retirement at fifty is just a beautiful dream, therefore you don't expect it. But the retirement for women in China is indeed 55. If you work in state-owned enterprises, the retirement age for women is 50.
Yes, every time I drink green tea, I kind of vomit. Now I just drink black tea occasionally, because black tea is cooked tea. It's said that it has the function of warming the stomach. Speaking of hot water, I can't help laughing because this is what foreigners always laugh at. Maybe people think drinking boiled water is very good for one's health and this is true, but it doesn't have special cure functions for humans. For me, even if I am Chinese, I rarely drink boiled water unless I am thirsty, so just being natural, drink it when you want and remember that it doesn't have special functions.
Delta virus was indeed emerging in Guangzhou, but only after one month did it overcome. Now in China, we have good controls on coronavirus, and we have a normal life.
The day when your messages came, I indeed did something not as usual. I cycled to an old street that was 18 kilometers from where I live. When I returned home, I found that my shoulder was sunburned.
The reason why I replied to you so late is that we held a few days of ginger planting training after I got your messages. I will send you some pictures and videos about this training.
Okay, let's stop here. See you next time.
Journal
I looked up Independence Day on the internet and learned that it's the national day of the USUS holiday.
This isn't quite right...I would say "it's a US holiday celebrating America's independence from Britain."
I wish great Americans a happy iIndependent dDay.
"great Americans" sounds a bit odd here.
Yes, among the four seasons, summer is the season that rained a lowhere it rains most.
"Among the four seasons" suggests you're setting up a comparison, hence my suggestion.
During summer, you need to take your clothes outside to dry,; otherwise, they will go mouldy.
Indeed, money is a good thing, but if making money affects our life quality of life, I'd rather not earn the money.
The reason whyI think that the Chinese government prohibits members of the national staff from owning private business I think is that the government is afraid that the memberes out of fear that this will distract their focusm from their public positions.
It's not that they may use their authority to influence their business, because they usually don't have any power, t. They just earn a little hard-earned money bythrough their own hard work.
It's really nice that the US doesn't have any law to prevent civil servants from doing business.
If this is true, I really wish I could live in America.
I am very happy to hear that your products are very popular among your customers and I hope your team will do it better.
I am for sure that retirement at fifty is just a beautiful dream, t. Therefore you don't expect it.
But the retirement age for women in China is indeed 55.
If you work in state-owned enterprises, the retirement age for women is 50.
Yes, every time I drink green tea, I kind of vomit.
Now I just drink black tea occasionally, because black tea is cooked tea.
It's said that it has the function of warming the stomach.
More concise: "It's said that it warms the stomach."
Speaking of hot water, I can't help laughing because this is what foreigners always laugh at.
Maybe people think drinking boiled water is very good for one's health, and this is true, but it doesn't have special cure functions for humans.
For me, even ifthough I am Chinese, I rarely drink boiled water unless I am thirsty, so just being natural,I would say to drink it when you want and remember that it doesn't have special functions.
DThe delta virus was indeed emerging in Guangzhou, but only after one month did it overcomethe epidemic was over in just a month.
Now in China, we have good controls on coronavirus, and we have acoronavirus under control and life is back to normal life.
I just rewrote this with collocations that seemed appropriate to make it sound more natural.
The day when your messages came, I did indeed dido something unot as usual.
I believe that what you wrote is technically correct, but this sounds more natural to me.
I cycled to an old street that was 18 kilometers from where I live.
More concise: "I cycled to an old street 18 kilometers from where I live."
When I returned home, I found that my shoulder was sunburned.
The reason why I replied to you so late is that we held a few days of ginger planting training after I got your messages.
I will send you some pictures and videos aboutof this training.
Okay, let's stop here.
See you next time.
July 11, 2021
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I looked up Independence Day on the internet and learned that it's the national day of the US. I looked up Independence Day on the internet and learned that it's the national This isn't quite right...I would say "it's a US holiday celebrating America's independence from Britain." |
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I wish great Americans a happy independent day. I wish "great Americans" sounds a bit odd here. |
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Yes, among the four seasons, summer is the season that rained a lot. Yes, among the four seasons, summer is the season "Among the four seasons" suggests you're setting up a comparison, hence my suggestion. |
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During summer, you need to take your clothes outside to dry, otherwise they will go mouldy. During summer, you need to take your clothes outside to dry |
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Indeed, money is a good thing, but if making money affects our life quality, I'd rather not earn the money. Indeed, money is a good thing, but if making money affects our |
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The reason why the Chinese government prohibits members of the national staff from owning private business I think is that the government is afraid that the members will distract their focus from their public position.
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It's not that they may use their authority to influence their business, because they usually don't have any power, they just earn a little hard-earned money by their own hard work. It's not that they may use their authority to influence their business |
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It's really nice that the US doesn't have any law to prevent civil servants from doing business. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If this is true, I really wish I could live in America. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am very happy to hear that your products are very popular among your customers and I hope your team will do it better. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am for sure that retirement at fifty is just a beautiful dream, therefore you don't expect it. I am |
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But the retirement for women in China is indeed 55. But the retirement age for women in China is indeed 55. |
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If you work in state-owned enterprises, the retirement age for women is 50. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yes, every time I drink green tea, I kind of vomit. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now I just drink black tea occasionally, because black tea is cooked tea. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's said that it has the function of warming the stomach. It's said that it has the function of warming the stomach. More concise: "It's said that it warms the stomach." |
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Speaking of hot water, I can't help laughing because this is what foreigners always laugh at. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe people think drinking boiled water is very good for one's health and this is true, but it doesn't have special cure functions for humans. Maybe people think drinking boiled water is very good for one's health, and this is true, but it doesn't have special cure functions for humans. |
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For me, even if I am Chinese, I rarely drink boiled water unless I am thirsty, so just being natural, drink it when you want and remember that it doesn't have special functions. For me, even |
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Delta virus was indeed emerging in Guangzhou, but only after one month did it overcome.
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Now in China, we have good controls on coronavirus, and we have a normal life. Now in China, we have I just rewrote this with collocations that seemed appropriate to make it sound more natural. |
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The day when your messages came, I indeed did something not as usual. The day when your messages came, I did indeed d I believe that what you wrote is technically correct, but this sounds more natural to me. |
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I cycled to an old street that was 18 kilometers from where I live. I cycled to an old street that was 18 kilometers from where I live. More concise: "I cycled to an old street 18 kilometers from where I live." |
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When I returned home, I found that my shoulder was sunburned. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The reason why I replied to you so late is that we held a few days of ginger planting training after I got your messages. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I will send you some pictures and videos about this training. I will send you some pictures and videos |
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Okay, let's stop here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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See you next time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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