June 30, 2021
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Being an enterprise is very hard and often faces challenges and pressures. In contrast, it is more comfortable to go to work.
All levels of camping? This formulation broadened my horizons. When I was young, on summer nights, I often slept on the threshing floor with other children. Should it be regarded as the most primitive camping activity? At that time, we didn't have tents, we just had reed mats. The camping of friends was really happy, but if it rains at night, the embarrassment of having to rush home from sleep is very uncomfortable.
Your office is very warm and tidy, with a nice view of seeing the wooden forest outside. It looks like your office is built in the wilderness, which is very close to nature.
Time flies so fast. Half a year has passed in a flash. My short-term goal is to master English well, and then look for new goals.
Being an enterprise is very hard and often faces challenges and pressures.
Being an enterprise is not very natural, do you mean being an entrepreneur?
In contrast, itHowever, going to work is more comfortable to go to work.
All levels of camping?
no sure what you mean here or how this fits in with your previous sentences.
This formulation broadened my horizons.
Again, not clear what you mean here.
When I was young, on summer nights, I often slept on the threshing floor with other children on summer nights.
threshing is not a commonly used word and it doesnt fit here, what did you mean to say?
Should ithis be regarded as the most primitive camping activityform of camping?
The cCamping ofwith friends wasmade me really happy, but if it rainsed at night, the embarrassment of having to rush home fromto sleep is very uncomfortablewas embarrassing.
Your officIn contrast, my house is very warm and tidy, with a nice view of seeing the wooden forestforrest view outside.
You may need to elaborate to connect this to camping because typically people dont sleep or camp in their offices. Unless you meant to say house.
It looks like your offichome is built in the wilderness, which is very close to nature.
My short-term goal is to master English well, and then look for new goals.
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July 2, 2021
Being an enterprise is very hard and often faces challenges and pressures.
Yeah. Being an entrepreneur.
July 2, 2021
All levels of camping?
My pen-pal said to me in her last message that “there are many different levels of camping”
July 2, 2021
When I was young, on summer nights, I often slept on the threshing floor with other children on summer nights.
Does “threshing floor” mean 打谷场？I translated on google.
July 2, 2021
Your officIn contrast, my house is very warm and tidy, with a nice view of seeing the wooden forestforrest view outside.
I wrote the responses according to the content that my pen-pal wrote to me. Those contents are independent of each other.
July 2, 2021
Thank you very much.
July 4, 2021
My pen-pal said to me in her last message that “there are many different levels of camping”
Yup there are certainly many different types fo camping, I'm just not sure how this sentence fit with your previous sentence, you may need to add more context. Also the sentence has no verb and I'm not sure what the question mark is for...
July 4, 2021
Does “threshing floor” mean 打谷场？I translated on google.
Ohh ok I understand, yes I guess you could say that.
Journal
Being an enterprise is very hard and often faces challenges and pressures.
"Enterprise" is the wrong word for this sentence. Having your own business? Working in an office? Being an independent contractor?
In contrast, it is more comfortable to go to work.
All levels of camping?
This formulationexperience broadened my horizons.
When I was young, on summer nights, I often slept on the threshing floor with other children.
Should it be regarded as the most primitive camping activity?
At that time, we didn't have tents, we just had reed mats.
The cCamping ofwith friends was really happyfun, but if it rainsed at night, the embarrassment of havingwe had to rush home fromto sleep is very uncomfortable.and that was unpleasant.
Your office is very warm and tidy, with a nice view of seeing the wooden forest outside.
It looks like your office is built in the wilderness, which is very close to nature.
Time flies so fast.
Half a year has passed in a flash.
My short-term goal is to master English well, and then look for new goals.
July 1, 2021
Thank you very much.
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The camping of friends was really happy, but if it rains at night, the embarrassment of having to rush home from sleep is very uncomfortable.
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Your office is very warm and tidy, with a nice view of seeing the wooden forest outside. Your office is very warm and tidy, with a nice view of
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