June 29, 2021
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Skin care and health is a promising industry nowadays. People become more and more concerned about their body. Like what I said, doing things you like gives you great joy, so I can feel your feelings when you have done things that can help people. I believe what you said because I once saw you in a video that you indeed don't look as old as you really are, and moreover you actually are a beautiful lady.
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Skin care and health is a promising industry nowadays.
People become more and more concerned about their body.
Like what I said, doing things you like gives you great joy, so I can feel your feelings when you have done things that can help people.
it is unclear to me what you are trying to say in that section.
I believe what you said because I once saw you in a video that youand indeed, you don't look as old as you really are, and m. Moreover you actually are a beautiful lady.
June 30, 2021
Like what I said, doing things you like gives you great joy, so I can feel your feelings when you have done things that can help people.
My pen-pal said that she always feels happy when she has done things that can help others. I said that I could feel her feelings.
June 30, 2021
Thank you very much.
June 30, 2021
My pen-pal said that she always feels happy when she has done things that can help others. I said that I could feel her feelings.
That part is written clearly.
I guess the confusion for me was more so how it fits into the context of the rest of the paragraph. You're talking about skincare and looks. And then you says that she felt good helping others. Adding a sentence before that could explain what she did to help others, and that may connect this sentence to the rest of the paragraph.
June 30, 2021
Okay, thank you very much.
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Skin care and health is a promising industry nowadays. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People become more and more concerned about their body. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Like what I said, doing things you like gives you great joy, so I can feel your feelings when you have done things that can help people. Like what I said, doing things you like gives you great joy it is unclear to me what you are trying to say in that section. |
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I believe what you said because I once saw you in a video that you indeed don't look as old as you really are, and moreover you actually are a beautiful lady. I believe what you said because I once saw you in a video |
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