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Journal 20/20/20

The first time I took the bus was in the early eighties and I was a teenager back then. Why did I have to take the bus? Because I need to go to Taihe county to take the high school entrance examination. In my memory, there were two buses in our town each day at that time: one started in the morning and another started in the afternoon. The exam took two days in total and I got good grades. My current job was a reward for that examination. Now when I think of these things, I feel very interested.

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The first time I took the bus was in the early eighties and I was a teenager back then.

Why did I have to take the bus?

Because I neehad to go to Taihe county to take the high school entrance examination.

In my memory,As I remember, back then there were two buses in our town each day at that time: one stdeparted in the morning and another started in the afternoon.

The exam took two days in total and I got good grades.

My current job was a reward for that examination.

Now when I think of these things, I feel veryI recall these things with interested.

Alternatively: it's interesting to recall these things now

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Oct. 20, 2020

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Journal 20/20/20


The first time I took the bus was in the early eighties and I was a teenager back then.


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Why did I have to take the bus?


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Because I need to go to Taihe county to take the high school entrance examination.


Because I neehad to go to Taihe county to take the high school entrance examination.

In my memory, there were two buses in our town each day at that time: one started in the morning and another started in the afternoon.


In my memory,As I remember, back then there were two buses in our town each day at that time: one stdeparted in the morning and another started in the afternoon.

The exam took two days in total and I got good grades.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My current job was a reward for that examination.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now when I think of these things, I feel very interested.


Now when I think of these things, I feel veryI recall these things with interested.

Alternatively: it's interesting to recall these things now

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