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Jack

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Journal 2020.10.14.01

My first work unit was in a county which was located in the mid-east part of Anhui Province. Our work place was on a small hillside with several rows of bungalows. My second work unit was in the city l live in now, and it was also with some bungalows. My third work unit was in the same city and only had three or four rooms. My fourth work unit was the second one, but when I returned there, it had added three buildings. My fifth work unit is the current one, and it is the most modern one I have ever worked in. It is in a tall modern office building. The decorations are very luxurious, but I prefer to work in the fourth work unit because it has a big yard, so I can go to the yard to take a break and breathe some fresh air.

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My first work unit was in a county which wais located in the mid-east part of Anhui Province.

The County has not moved, so you would use the present tense.

Our work place was on a small hillside with several rows of bungalows.

My second work unit was in the city l live in nowwhere l currently live, and it was also with somehad bungalows.

My third work unit was also in the same city and it only had three or four rooms.

My fourth work unit was located in the same place as the second one, but when I returned there, it had added three buildings.

My fifth work unit is the current one, and Finally, out of all the units that I've ever worked in, my fifth and current work unit ihas the most modern one I have ever worked in.facilities.

It is in a tall and modern office building.

The decorations are very luxurious, buyet I still prefer to work in the fourth work unit because it hasd a big yard, so I can go to the yard toallowing me take a breaks outside and breathe somin the fresh air.

Journal 2020.10.14.01

My first work unit was in a county which was located in the mid-east part of Anhui Province.

I'm not sure what you mean by work unit. Maybe "workplace"? or "The first office I worked in".

Our work place was on a small hillside with several rows of bungalows.

My second work unit was in the city l live in now, and it was also with somesurrounded by bungalows.

My third work unit was in the same city and only had three or four rooms.

My fourth work unit was the same as the second one, but when I returned there, it had addedwent back, three new buildings had been added.

My fifth work unit is themy current onworkplace, and it is the most modern one I have ever worked in.

It is in a tall modern office building.

The decorations are is very luxurious, but I prefer to work inred the fourth work unit because it hasd a big yard, so I canould go to the yard to take a break and breatheget some fresh air.

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Jack

Oct. 14, 2020

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My first work unit was in a county which was located in the mid-east part of Anhui Province.

工作单位。you are right. I don’t know how to say 工作单位 in English.

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Jack

Oct. 14, 2020

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Thank you very much. Could you please tell me how do you say 工作单位 in English.

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hotaru

Oct. 14, 2020

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Oh I see. I think "workplace" or "place of work" is more natural in this case! You can also just say "office".

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Jack

Oct. 14, 2020

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I got it, thank you very much.

Journal 2020.10.14.01


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My first work unit was in a county which was located in the mid-east part of Anhui Province.


My first work unit was in a county which was located in the mid-east part of Anhui Province.

I'm not sure what you mean by work unit. Maybe "workplace"? or "The first office I worked in".

My first work unit was in a county which wais located in the mid-east part of Anhui Province.

The County has not moved, so you would use the present tense.

Our work place was on a small hillside with several rows of bungalows.


Our work place was on a small hillside with several rows of bungalows.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My second work unit was in the city l live in now, and it was also with some bungalows.


My second work unit was in the city l live in now, and it was also with somesurrounded by bungalows.

My second work unit was in the city l live in nowwhere l currently live, and it was also with somehad bungalows.

My third work unit was in the same city and only had three or four rooms.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My third work unit was also in the same city and it only had three or four rooms.

My fourth work unit was the second one, but when I returned there, it had added three buildings.


My fourth work unit was the same as the second one, but when I returned there, it had addedwent back, three new buildings had been added.

My fourth work unit was located in the same place as the second one, but when I returned there, it had added three buildings.

My fifth work unit is the current one, and it is the most modern one I have ever worked in.


My fifth work unit is themy current onworkplace, and it is the most modern one I have ever worked in.

My fifth work unit is the current one, and Finally, out of all the units that I've ever worked in, my fifth and current work unit ihas the most modern one I have ever worked in.facilities.

It is in a tall modern office building.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is in a tall and modern office building.

The decorations are very luxurious, but I prefer to work in the fourth work unit because it has a big yard, so I can go to the yard to take a break and breathe some fresh air.


The decorations are is very luxurious, but I prefer to work inred the fourth work unit because it hasd a big yard, so I canould go to the yard to take a break and breatheget some fresh air.

The decorations are very luxurious, buyet I still prefer to work in the fourth work unit because it hasd a big yard, so I can go to the yard toallowing me take a breaks outside and breathe somin the fresh air.

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