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Journal 2020.10.13.01

When I was in middle school, l had the experience of being a street vendor. At that time, among villages near my village, there was a village named Xiaolizhuang, and their villagers were all rich because they were doing vegetable trade in our home market town. At that time, every family in the countryside had a small vegetable garden for their self supply. So I thought, why couldn't I go to the market town to sell some green beans? We can't finish eating them anyway. My school was located in the market town too. It was about the first year of middle school. One day, when I was off class, I took a few handful of beans to the market town. I forgot what the price was back then, but I do remember that I didn't sell a piece of beans, even though there were some people who asked the price of them. Finally, I had to bring them home and eat them. That is the only time I have been a street vendor, even though nothing was sold, I remember that clearly until now.

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When I was in middle school, l had the experience of beingd what it was like to be a street vendor.

At that time, among villages near my village, there was a nearly village named Xiaolizhuang, and their villagers were all rich because they were dowhose inhabitants were all rich from selling vegetables trade in our home market towno the market in my village.

At that time, every family in the countryside had a small vegetable garden for their self supplyown consumption.

So I thought, why couldn't I to myself why not go to the market town toand sell some green beans? from my family garden, since we can't eat it all anyways.

We can't finish eating them anyway.

My school was located inear the market town too.

It was about the first year of middle school.

I would delete this entire sentence since you already established you were in middle school when all this was happening.

One day, when I was offnot in class, I took a few handful of beans to the market town.

I forgot what the price was back then, but I do remember that I didn't sell a piece of beansnything, even though there were some people who asked the price of them.inquired about the cost.

FinallyIn the end, I had to bring themtake the beans home and eat them myself.

That iis was the only time I have beenwas a street vendor, even . Although nothing was sold, I remember that clearly until nowstill have vivid memories of the incident today.

At that time, among villages near my villageby, there was a village named Xiaolizhuang, and their villagers were all rich because they were doing vegetable trade in our home marketing in the market of our home town.

At that time, every family in the countryside had a small vegetable garden for their self supplyown needs.

So I thought, why couldn't I go to the market town to sell some green beans?

We can't finishAs we could not possibly eating them anywayll.

It was abroutnd the first year of middle school.

One day, when I was off from class, I took a few handful of beans to the market town.

I forgot what the price was back then, but I do remember that I didn't sell a piece ofsingle beans, even though there were some people who asked what the price of themwas.

FinallyIn the end, I had to bring them all home and eat them myself.

That is the only time I have been a street vendor, even though nothing was sold, I remember that experience clearly until now.

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Jack

Oct. 13, 2020

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Thank you for your corrections. Thank you very much.

Journal 2020.10.13.01


When I was in middle school, l had the experience of being a street vendor.


When I was in middle school, l had the experience of beingd what it was like to be a street vendor.

At that time, among villages near my village, there was a village named Xiaolizhuang, and their villagers were all rich because they were doing vegetable trade in our home market town.


At that time, among villages near my villageby, there was a village named Xiaolizhuang, and their villagers were all rich because they were doing vegetable trade in our home marketing in the market of our home town.

At that time, among villages near my village, there was a nearly village named Xiaolizhuang, and their villagers were all rich because they were dowhose inhabitants were all rich from selling vegetables trade in our home market towno the market in my village.

At that time, every family in the countryside had a small vegetable garden for their self supply.


At that time, every family in the countryside had a small vegetable garden for their self supplyown needs.

At that time, every family in the countryside had a small vegetable garden for their self supplyown consumption.

So I thought, why couldn't I go to the market town to sell some green beans?


So I thought, why couldn't I go to the market town to sell some green beans?

So I thought, why couldn't I to myself why not go to the market town toand sell some green beans? from my family garden, since we can't eat it all anyways.

We can't finish eating them anyway.


We can't finishAs we could not possibly eating them anywayll.

We can't finish eating them anyway.

My school was located in the market town too.


My school was located inear the market town too.

It was about the first year of middle school.


It was abroutnd the first year of middle school.

It was about the first year of middle school.

I would delete this entire sentence since you already established you were in middle school when all this was happening.

One day, when I was off class, I took a few handful of beans to the market town.


One day, when I was off from class, I took a few handful of beans to the market town.

One day, when I was offnot in class, I took a few handful of beans to the market town.

I forgot what the price was back then, but I do remember that I didn't sell a piece of beans, even though there were some people who asked the price of them.


I forgot what the price was back then, but I do remember that I didn't sell a piece ofsingle beans, even though there were some people who asked what the price of themwas.

I forgot what the price was back then, but I do remember that I didn't sell a piece of beansnything, even though there were some people who asked the price of them.inquired about the cost.

Finally, I had to bring them home and eat them.


FinallyIn the end, I had to bring them all home and eat them myself.

FinallyIn the end, I had to bring themtake the beans home and eat them myself.

That is the only time I have been a street vendor, even though nothing was sold, I remember that clearly until now.


That is the only time I have been a street vendor, even though nothing was sold, I remember that experience clearly until now.

That iis was the only time I have beenwas a street vendor, even . Although nothing was sold, I remember that clearly until nowstill have vivid memories of the incident today.

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