Oct. 11, 2020
Journal 2020.10.11.3
Every time I visit my mom by bike, I have to go through the entire development zone. I think it is a fantastic journey, especially on the night of autumn. Wide tidy streets, warm street lamps and verdant trees, flowers, all of them are quiet. There are few people passing by and so are cars. The cool night wind blows, one person with one bike rides in the breeze carelessly, it seems like a dream. I feel like I am in a strange city that I have never been to. All of the things are so peaceful and beautiful, a kind of joy and happiness comes to heart. Sometimes, I assume that if there are a few mountains and a piece of sea surrounding our city, that will be amazing. Our city is changing, our life is changing and our motherland is changing too. Bless great motherland, bless great people and hope our life will be better and better.
Journal 2020.10.11.3
Every timeWhenever I visit my mom by bike, I have to go through thean entire development zone.
I think it is a fantastic journey, especially on the night ofan autumn night.
Wide tidy streets, warm street lamps, and verdant trees, and flowers, all of them are quiet.
There are few people passing by and so are-- likewise with cars.
The cool night wind blows,; one person with one bike rides in the breeze carelessly, i. It seems like a dream.
Use 「；」to separate two sentences without adding a conjunction (and, but, etc)
I feel like I am in a strange city that I have never been to.
All of the things areEverything is so peaceful and beautiful,; a kind of joy and happiness comes tofills my heart.
Sometimes, I assume that if there arethink that having a few mountains and a piece ofthe sea surrounding our city, that will would be amazing.
Our city is changing, our life is changing, and our motherland is changing too.
Bless our great motherland, bless great people, and hope our lifeves will be better and better.
Oct. 11, 2020
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Every time I visit my mom by bike, I have to go through the entire development zone.
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I think it is a fantastic journey, especially on the night of autumn. I think it is a fantastic journey, especially on |
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Wide tidy streets, warm street lamps and verdant trees, flowers, all of them are quiet. Wide tidy streets, warm street lamps, and verdant trees |
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There are few people passing by and so are cars. There are few people passing by |
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The cool night wind blows, one person with one bike rides in the breeze carelessly, it seems like a dream. The cool night wind blows Use 「；」to separate two sentences without adding a conjunction (and, but, etc) |
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I feel like I am in a strange city that I have never been to. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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All of the things are so peaceful and beautiful, a kind of joy and happiness comes to heart.
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Sometimes, I assume that if there are a few mountains and a piece of sea surrounding our city, that will be amazing. Sometimes, I |
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Our city is changing, our life is changing and our motherland is changing too. Our city is changing, our life is changing, and our motherland is changing too. |
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Bless great motherland, bless great people and hope our life will be better and better. Bless our great motherland, bless great people, and hope our li |
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