Dec. 20, 2020
Journal 20/12/20
Although I don't know which city you live in, the weather sounds similar to that of northeast China because the temperature there in winter is also minus thirty to forty degrees Celsius. To be honest, I prefer mild weather. I have been to southern China like Guangzhou, Shenzhen, Sanya, as well as northern China like Hulunbeier, Manzhouli, so I know a little bit the weather difference between the north and the south. My home town Fuyang is located in the Mideast part of China and we have four different seasons. In the summer, it rains a lot and it is a little bit moist and the highest temperature range is between thirty-five to forty degrees Celsius. In the winter, the lowest temperature range is between minus ten to twenty degrees. In spring and autumn, the weather is pretty nice, though it is a bit dry in autumn. During these two seasons, the temperature range is usually between ten to twenty-five degrees Celsius. But I still have a dream that when I retire I want to find a small southern coastal town with mountains to live in. I don't know if this dream can come true.
Journal 20/12/20
Although I don't know which city you live in, the weather sounds similar to that of northeast China because the temperature there in winter is also minus thirty to forty degrees Celsius.
To be honest, I prefer mild weather.
I have been to southern China like Guangzhou, Shenzhen, Sanya, as well as northern China like Hulunbeier, Manzhouli, so I know a little bit about the weather difference between the north and the south.
My home town, Fuyang, is located in the Mmideast part of China and we have four different seasons.
In the summer, it rains a lot and it is a little bit moist and the highest temperature range is between thirty-five to forty degrees Celsius.
You would say the "highest temperature" rather than "highest temperature range"
In the winter, the lowest temperature range is between minus ten to twenty degrees.
During these two seasons, the temperature range is usually between ten to twenty-five degrees Ccelsius.
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Dec. 22, 2020
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Although I don't know which city you live in, the weather sounds similar to that of northeast China because the temperature there in winter is also minus thirty to forty degrees Celsius. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To be honest, I prefer mild weather. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have been to southern China like Guangzhou, Shenzhen, Sanya, as well as northern China like Hulunbeier, Manzhouli, so I know a little bit the weather difference between the north and the south. I have been to southern China like Guangzhou, Shenzhen, Sanya, as well as northern China like Hulunbeier, Manzhouli, so I know a little bit about the weather difference between the north and the south. |
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My home town Fuyang is located in the Mideast part of China and we have four different seasons. My home town, Fuyang, is located in the |
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In the summer, it rains a lot and it is a little bit moist and the highest temperature range is between thirty-five to forty degrees Celsius. In the summer, it rains a lot and it is a little bit moist and the You would say the "highest temperature" rather than "highest temperature range" |
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In the winter, the lowest temperature range is between minus ten to twenty degrees. In the winter, the |
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In spring and autumn, the weather is pretty nice, though it is a bit dry in autumn. |
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During these two seasons, the temperature range is usually between ten to twenty-five degrees Celsius. During these two seasons, the temperature range is usually between ten to twenty-five degrees |
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But I still have a dream that when I retire I want to find a small southern coastal town with mountains to live in. |
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I don't know if this dream can come true. |
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