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Jack

Dec. 20, 2020

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Journal 20/12/20

I looked at the picture you sent me carefully. I can see the blue sky and the distant woods, and the snow on the ground. The scene is definitely shot in the wild. But I have two questions that I want to know, if it is convenient for you to answer. First, is your office in the wild? What is the thing that is on the left of the picture? Is it a bridge? But it looks unlike a bridge. So I am very curious about that.

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I looked at the picture you sent me carefully.

I can see the blue sky and, the distant woods, and the snow on the ground.

The scene iwas definitely shot in the wilderness.

Or you can say in the countryside, or in nature. Depending on the nuance of what you are trying to say.

But I have two questions that I want to know, if it is convenient for you to answer.for you.

If you were worried about the inconvenience of your questions, you probably wouldn't be asking in the first place.

First, is your office located in the wilderness?

Again, if there is an office, it is probably not located in the wild, or in the wilderness. Most likely it is in the countryside. To most anglophones, being in the wild is like being in Antartica, or Alaska or someplace where you hardly see people. The fact that there is a building tells me "wild" or "wilderness" may not be the word you want to use.

What is the thing that is ono the left of the picture?

You probably do not want to use the word "picture", as it denotes the entire photo, including the bridge. You should be more specific, such as "what is to the left of that big tree" or "what is to the left of that mountain range."

Is it a bridge?

But iIt doesn't looks un like a bridge.

So I am very curious about thait.

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Jack

Dec. 20, 2020

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Thank you very much.

Journal 20/12/20


I looked at the picture you sent me carefully.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I can see the blue sky and the distant woods, and the snow on the ground.


I can see the blue sky and, the distant woods, and the snow on the ground.

The scene is definitely shot in the wild.


The scene iwas definitely shot in the wilderness.

Or you can say in the countryside, or in nature. Depending on the nuance of what you are trying to say.

But I have two questions that I want to know, if it is convenient for you to answer.


But I have two questions that I want to know, if it is convenient for you to answer.for you.

If you were worried about the inconvenience of your questions, you probably wouldn't be asking in the first place.

First, is your office in the wild?


First, is your office located in the wilderness?

Again, if there is an office, it is probably not located in the wild, or in the wilderness. Most likely it is in the countryside. To most anglophones, being in the wild is like being in Antartica, or Alaska or someplace where you hardly see people. The fact that there is a building tells me "wild" or "wilderness" may not be the word you want to use.

What is the thing that is on the left of the picture?


What is the thing that is ono the left of the picture?

You probably do not want to use the word "picture", as it denotes the entire photo, including the bridge. You should be more specific, such as "what is to the left of that big tree" or "what is to the left of that mountain range."

Is it a bridge?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But it looks unlike a bridge.


But iIt doesn't looks un like a bridge.

So I am very curious about that.


So I am very curious about thait.

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