June 29, 2021
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I remember I told you I was really poor in the early years and I thought I had to do something to change the situation. The first thought that came to me was to get a lawyer's qualification and to be a lawyer because I know that lawyers have high incomes. At that time, as long as you have an undergraduate degree, you can take the national judicial examination. But at that point, I didn't have an undergraduate degree. I had to study for it and it would take me three years to get a degree. It was my second year of studying that I decided to run some business because I didn't think it was a smart way to take an exam waiting for three years. Therefore, I did it. Two years later, when I got the degree, I took the exam immediately, and I passed it in the first shot, though it was very difficult to get.
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I remember I told you I was really poor in the early years and I thought I had to do something to change the situation.
The first thought that came to me was to get a lawyer's qualification and to be a lawyer because I know that lawyers have high incomes.
At that time, as long as you haved an undergraduate degree, you canould take the national judicial examination.
But at that point, I didn't have an undergraduate degree.
I had to study for it and it would take me three years to get a degree.
It was during my second year of studying that I decided to run some business becausees. I didn't think it was a smart way to take an exam waiting for three yearsto wait three years to take an exam.
Therefore, I did it.
Unclear what "I did it" refers to. Does "it" refer to therefore you started a business? Or does "it" refer to therefore you took the exam?
Two years later, when I got themy degree, I took the exam immediately, and I passed it in the first shot, though it was very difficult to get.
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I remember I told you I was really poor in the early years and I thought I had to do something to change the situation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The first thought that came to me was to get a lawyer's qualification and to be a lawyer because I know that lawyers have high incomes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At that time, as long as you have an undergraduate degree, you can take the national judicial examination. At that time, as long as you ha |
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But at that point, I didn't have an undergraduate degree. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had to study for it and it would take me three years to get a degree. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was my second year of studying that I decided to run some business because I didn't think it was a smart way to take an exam waiting for three years. It was during my second year of studying that I decided to run some business |
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Therefore, I did it. Therefore, I did it. Unclear what "I did it" refers to. Does "it" refer to therefore you started a business? Or does "it" refer to therefore you took the exam? |
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Two years later, when I got the degree, I took the exam immediately, and I passed it in the first shot, though it was very difficult to get. Two years later, when I got |
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