March 3, 2021
Journal 2
1. I have lost my appetite these days. I cannot figure out why. It could be the prescribed medications that I am taking. Or it could be because of the stress. Could it be because of the coconut milk I have been drinking? (As some say coconut oil reduces appetite.)
I used to be hungry every time and be munching on snacks between meals. But past few weeks I didn't eat any snacks all afternoon, despite that I had small amounts of meal for lunch.
But on a positive note, my IBS symptoms have gotten better, and I have lost some weight.
Losing appetite might be a good thing, after all.
2. I am watching Modern Family on Netflix these days. I love Gloria’s character. Sofia Vergara, the actress who plays the character, is so cute and bubbly. She is the life of the show. I have read somewhere on the Internet that Gloria’s character was influenced by Sofia Vergara, who actively participated in writing the script.
I am on Season 5 now, (I skipped 2-4.) and I love the chemistry between the characters. For one thing though, Luke’s (the son of the Dunphy family) acting seemed a bit awkward for a few episodes, as to the point that I lost concentration. (= I couldn’t focus on the show.^^;;)
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Journal 2
1. I have lost my appetite these days.
I cannot figure out why.
It could be the prescribed medications that I am taking.
Or it could be because of the stress.
"stress" is a condition, like "hunger" or "tiredness".
Could it be because of the coconut milk I have been drinking?
(As some say coconut oil reduces appetite. )
I used to be hungry everyall the time and be munchinged on snacks between meals.
But past few weeks I didn't eat any snacks all afternoon, despite thae fact I had a small amounts of meal for lunch.
But on a positive note, my IBS symptoms have gotten better, and I have lost some weight.
Losing appetite might be a good thing, after all.
2. I am watching Modern Family on Netflix these days.
I love Gloria’s character.
Sofia Vergara, the actress who plays the character, is so cute and bubbly.
She is the life of the show.
I have read somewhere on the Internet that Gloria’s character was influenced by Sofia Vergara, who actively participated in writing the script.
I am on Season 5 now, (I skipped 2-4.) and I love the chemistry between the characters.
For one thing though, Luke’s (the son of the Dunphy family) acting seemed a bit awkward for a few episodes, as to the point that I lost concentration.
(= I couldn’t focus on the show.^^;;)
+ Thanks <3
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This is really great writing - very clear and understandable :)
March 4, 2021
Wow,thank you for your corrections and comments!! haha 🍎🍎🙏🏻🙏🏻
I hope you have a happy day, today !
March 4, 2021
Not a problem!! I hope you do too ^^
I should check out Modern Family, it sounds great 👀
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(Could it be because of the coconut milk?) |
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I used to be hungry every time and be munching on snacks between meals. I used to be hungry |
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But past few weeks I didn't eat any snacks all afternoon, despite that I had small amounts of meal for lunch. But past few weeks I didn't eat any snacks all afternoon, despite th |
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But on a positive note, my IBS symptoms have gotten better, and I have lost some weight. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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2. I am watching Modern Family on Netflix these days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love Gloria’s character. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Sofia Vergara, the actress who plays the character, is so cute and bubbly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She is the life of the show. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have read somewhere on the Internet that Gloria’s character was influenced by Sofia Vergara, who actively participated in writing the script. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am on Season 5 now, (I skipped 2-4.) and I love the chemistry between the characters. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For one thing though, Luke’s (the son of the Dunphy family) acting seemed a bit awkward for a few episodes, as to the point that I lost concentration. For one thing though, Luke’s (the son of the Dunphy family) acting seemed a bit awkward for a few episodes, |
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(= I couldn’t focus on the show.^^;;) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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(As some say coconut oil reduces appetite. ) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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