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Generally, people spend sixteen years learning. Including six years for elementary school, six years for middle school, and four years for college. When they graduated from university, they were probably twenty-two years old. Then they get a job and work until they retire in their sixties. From twenty-two to sixty, there are still thirty-eight years and that is more than two times sixteen years. During this period, after finishing our work, have we seriously learnt? If we do, what can we achieve? I have been thinking about it recently, even though I don't know exactly the outcome you will gain. I am sure it will be a great success.

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Generally, people spend sixteen years learning.

Including sSix years forin elementary school, six years forin middle school, and four years forin college.

When they graduated from university, they weare probablyabout twenty-two years old.

Then they get a job and work until they retire in their sixties.

During this period, after finishing our work, havedo we seriously learnt?

If we do, what can we achieve?

I have been thinking about it recently, e. Even though I don't know exactly the outcome you will gainmay achieve, I am sure it will be a great success.

I am sure it will be a great success.

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Jack

Oct. 9, 2020

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Generally, people spend sixteen years learning.


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Including six years for elementary school, six years for middle school, and four years for college.


Including sSix years forin elementary school, six years forin middle school, and four years forin college.

When they graduated from university, they were probably twenty-two years old.


When they graduated from university, they weare probablyabout twenty-two years old.

Then they get a job and work until they retire in their sixties.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

From twenty-two to sixty, there are still thirty-eight years and that is more than two times sixteen years.


During this period, after finishing our work, have we seriously learnt?


During this period, after finishing our work, havedo we seriously learnt?

If we do, what can we achieve?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have been thinking about it recently, even though I don't know exactly the outcome you will gain.


I have been thinking about it recently, e. Even though I don't know exactly the outcome you will gainmay achieve, I am sure it will be a great success.

I am sure it will be a great success.


I am sure it will be a great success.

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