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Jack

June 22, 2021

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No problem. I feel very honored and happy to practice Mandarin with you. Actually, my Mandarin is not very good, and I need to improve it further.
There are also cross-country activities in China, but I have never participated in them. In my opinion, people who like cross-country should be young and middle-aged private bosses because they have money and time. As far as I know, there is an organization called Cross-Country E-Family in China. Even in my city, you can often see a Jeep with a sticker from the organization. Tires with this kind of car are usually relatively wide and off ground clearance of the off-roading car is very high, so they have good pass-abilities.
No matter what it is, it seems like the wild-grown ones are always better than those of artificially cultivated ones. The former tastes good and is nutritious. Take peaches, for example, the peaches I ate when I was young were mature naturally. Their core was mature and hard. You can easily break up the two petals of flesh, and moreover, the core and the flesh could be separated perfectly. But now, you will never find such peaches.
China has many blueberry products and merchants publicize them beautifully. But I still can't remember whether I have eaten it or not and it is hard to see it in fruit shops on ordinary days.
I will find some videos of Chinese off-road activities and send them to you for you to enjoy.

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No problem.

I feel very honored and happy to practice Mandarin with you.

Actually, my Mandarin is not very good, and I need to improve it further.

There are also cross-country activities in China, but I have never participated in them.

In my opinion, people who like cross-country should betend to be/are probably young and middle-aged private bosses because they have money and time.

"Should be" is like expressing a judgment about what they ought to do–I'm guessing you're making an assumption about people who like cross-country.

As far as I know, there is an organization called Cross-Country E-Family in China.

Even in my city, you can often see a Jeeps with a stickers from the organization.

Or "bumper stickers" (stickers that you put on the bumper of a car).

Tires with this kind of car are usually relatively wide and off ground clearance of the off-roading car is very high, so they have good pass-abilities.

No matter what it is, it seems like the wild-grown ones are always better than those ofe artificially cultivated ones.

The former tastes good and is nutritious.

Take peaches, for example, t. The peaches I ate when I was young were matureripened naturally.

Or "grown naturally."

Their core was mature and hard.

You can easily break up the two petals of flesh, and moreover, the core and the flesh could be separated perfectly.

But now, you will never find such peaches.

China has many blueberry products and merchants publicizadvertise them beautifully.

You usually publicize events or information, but you advertise products.

But I still can't remember whether I have eaten it or not, and it is hard to see it in fruit shops on ordinary days.

Comma between two independent clauses.

I will find some videos of Chinese off-road activities and send them to you for you to enjoy.

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Jack

July 5, 2021

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Thank you very much. You are very kind.

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No problem.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feel very honored and happy to practice Mandarin with you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Actually, my Mandarin is not very good, and I need to improve it further.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There are also cross-country activities in China, but I have never participated in them.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In my opinion, people who like cross-country should be young and middle-aged private bosses because they have money and time.


In my opinion, people who like cross-country should betend to be/are probably young and middle-aged private bosses because they have money and time.

"Should be" is like expressing a judgment about what they ought to do–I'm guessing you're making an assumption about people who like cross-country.

As far as I know, there is an organization called Cross-Country E-Family in China.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Even in my city, you can often see a Jeep with a sticker from the organization.


Even in my city, you can often see a Jeeps with a stickers from the organization.

Or "bumper stickers" (stickers that you put on the bumper of a car).

Tires with this kind of car are usually relatively wide and off ground clearance of the off-roading car is very high, so they have good pass-abilities.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

No matter what it is, it seems like the wild-grown ones are always better than those of artificially cultivated ones.


No matter what it is, it seems like the wild-grown ones are always better than those ofe artificially cultivated ones.

The former tastes good and is nutritious.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Take peaches, for example, the peaches I ate when I was young were mature naturally.


Take peaches, for example, t. The peaches I ate when I was young were matureripened naturally.

Or "grown naturally."

Their core was mature and hard.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can easily break up the two petals of flesh, and moreover, the core and the flesh could be separated perfectly.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But now, you will never find such peaches.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

China has many blueberry products and merchants publicize them beautifully.


China has many blueberry products and merchants publicizadvertise them beautifully.

You usually publicize events or information, but you advertise products.

But I still can't remember whether I have eaten it or not and it is hard to see it in fruit shops on ordinary days.


But I still can't remember whether I have eaten it or not, and it is hard to see it in fruit shops on ordinary days.

Comma between two independent clauses.

I will find some videos of Chinese off-road activities and send them to you for you to enjoy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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