Jan. 9, 2021
Journal 1/9/21
It seems in the winters, in the north of Canada, there are roads everywhere, even though they are just frozen lakes. This might be a beautiful scenery in the world. Although I have a short experience of fishing, I have never fish on a frozen lake. The fish in your picture is big, and I think it would be delicious because it is purely feral. I originally wanted to fish some big feral fish in a wild river, but they were all small crucians. I don’t like fishing in a fish pond because I don’t think it’s very interesting, and it wastes too much time. So I quit after about one year’s fishing.
There are several words that I can’t catch well in the penultimate paragraph. Could you please write them down for me?
The question in the last photo is how to say “hello” in Chinese, and my answer is 你好.
Besides, I want to know about New Year’s Day in Canada, and how many days off.
Moreover, do Canadians celebrate the Chinese New Year?
It seems in the winters, in the north of Canada, there are roads everywhere, even though they are just frozen lakes.
This might be athe most beautiful scenery in the world.
I am guessing about your intended meaning. When we end with "... in the world", we are comparing, so we must using comparing words like "more" or "most".
Although I have a shortlittle experience of fishing, I have never fished on a frozen lake.
The fish in your picture is big, and I think it would be delicious because it is purely feralwild.
The word "feral" refers only to mammals, like cats and dogs. I don't know why.
I originally wanted to fish for some big feralwild fish in a wild river, but they were all small crustacians.
I don’t like fishing in a fish pond because I don’t think it’s very interesting, and it wastes too much time.
Maybe "wastes" is wrong here. Do you want to say that fishing is in general a waste of time?
Maybe you mean "... and it takes too much time" or "... and most of the time, nothing is happening"
So I quit after about one year’s fishing.
There are several words that I can’t catchdon't understand well in the penultimate paragraph.
Could you please write them down for me?
The question in the last photo is how to say “hello” in Chinese, and my answer is 你好.
Besides, I want to know about New Year’s Day in Canada, and how many days people take off.
Moreover, do Canadians celebrate the Chinese New Year?
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Journal 1/9/21 |
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It seems in the winters, in the north of Canada, there are roads everywhere, even though they are just frozen lakes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This might be a beautiful scenery in the world. This might be I am guessing about your intended meaning. When we end with "... in the world", we are comparing, so we must using comparing words like "more" or "most". |
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Although I have a short experience of fishing, I have never fish on a frozen lake. Although I have |
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The fish in your picture is big, and I think it would be delicious because it is purely feral. The fish in your picture is big, and I think it would be delicious because it is purely The word "feral" refers only to mammals, like cats and dogs. I don't know why. |
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I originally wanted to fish some big feral fish in a wild river, but they were all small crucians. I originally wanted to fish for some big |
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I don’t like fishing in a fish pond because I don’t think it’s very interesting, and it wastes too much time. I don’t like fishing in a Maybe "wastes" is wrong here. Do you want to say that fishing is in general a waste of time? Maybe you mean "... and it takes too much time" or "... and most of the time, nothing is happening" |
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So I quit after about one year’s fishing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are several words that I can’t catch well in the penultimate paragraph. There are several words that I |
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Could you please write them down for me? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The question in the last photo is how to say “hello” in Chinese, and my answer is 你好. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Besides, I want to know about New Year’s Day in Canada, and how many days off. Besides, I want to know about New Year’s Day in Canada, and how many days people take off. |
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Moreover, do Canadians celebrate the Chinese New Year? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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