Dec. 19, 2020
Journal 19/12/20
I will go to Hangzhou to see my niece tomorrow morning and I will go by high speed train. It has been three months since she went to her workplace and I haven’t seen her since she left home. In order to get this job, she has tried her best and she also failed several times. As you all know, in China, a civil servant position is very hard to get and you have to be excellent in all aspects. The rate of civil servant enrollment is extremely low. Sometimes a position is competed by several hundred or several thousand people. In addition to her hard work, I think she also has a kind of luck in the process of getting a civil servant position. Hangzhou is a developed city in its economy and people here all live a high quality life. Civil servants are a highly ranked occupation in China and I believe she will have a good life in the future.
Journal 19/12/20
I will go to Hangzhou to see my niece tomorrow morning and I will go by high speed train.
It has been three months since she went to her workplace and I haven’t seen her since she left home.
In order to get this job, she has tried her best and she also failed several times.
As you all know, in China, a civil servant position is very hard to get and you have to be excellent in all aspects.
The rate of civil servant enrollment isApplications for civil service jobs have an extremely low success rate.
“Enrollment” is more a word I associate with schools or various programmes.
Sometimes a position is competed by, several hundred or several thousand people compete for a single position.
Or the original phrasing using “is competed for” instead of just “is competed.” Prepositions used by indirect objects must be kept when using the passive voice, when the object of the action turns into a subject.
In addition to her hard work, I think she also hasd a kind of luck in the process of getting a civil servant position.
“A kind of” can work in some situations, though “some sort of” may be more appropriate if you don’t necessarily have a fully fleshed-out idea of what it is.
Hangzhou is a developed city in its economy and people here all live a high quality life.
Civil servants areice is a highly ranked occupation in China and I believe she will have a good life in the future.
While an answer to the question of what someone’s occupation is might be a job title, such as “civil servant,” I wouldn’t necessarily describe specific job titles as occupations.
Dec. 19, 2020
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I will go to Hangzhou to see my niece tomorrow morning and I will go by high speed train. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It has been three months since she went to her workplace and I haven’t seen her since she left home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In order to get this job, she has tried her best and she also failed several times. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As you all know, in China, a civil servant position is very hard to get and you have to be excellent in all aspects. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The rate of civil servant enrollment is extremely low.
“Enrollment” is more a word I associate with schools or various programmes. |
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Sometimes a position is competed by several hundred or several thousand people. Sometimes Or the original phrasing using “is competed for” instead of just “is competed.” Prepositions used by indirect objects must be kept when using the passive voice, when the object of the action turns into a subject. |
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In addition to her hard work, I think she also has a kind of luck in the process of getting a civil servant position. In addition to her hard work, I think she also ha “A kind of” can work in some situations, though “some sort of” may be more appropriate if you don’t necessarily have a fully fleshed-out idea of what it is. |
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Hangzhou is a developed city in its economy and people here all live a high quality life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Civil servants are a highly ranked occupation in China and I believe she will have a good life in the future. Civil serv While an answer to the question of what someone’s occupation is might be a job title, such as “civil servant,” I wouldn’t necessarily describe specific job titles as occupations. |
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