June 20, 2021
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I am very sorry to hear what you have gone through and I can't imagine how finely you overcome them. That must be really suffering. Sometimes God is unfair because he puts the suffering on the wrong person. So now everything is unimportant for us except health. We should live happily and healthily. To keep a healthy body, I now don't drink alcohol, don't smoke cigarettes, sleep early and get up early. Besides, I ride my bicycle as much as I can. I hope the illness keeps you away and from now on you have a strong body and a good mood. All the best things are full of your life. I pray for you and God bless you. Take care, happiness and healthiness are coming to you on their way.
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I am very sorry to hear what you have gone through, and I can't imagine how finely youyou've managed to overcome them.
That must be really sufferagonizing/painful/excruciating.
"Suffering" is a noun or verb, not an adjective.
Sometimes God is unfair because he puts the suffering on the wrong person.
You could capitalize "He"–people often do this with pronouns that refer to God (and Jesus for Christians).
So now everything is unimportant for us except health.
We should live happily and healthily.
To keep a healthy body, I now don't drink alcohol, don't smoke cigarettes, sleep early and get up early.
Besides, I ride my bicycle as much as I can.
I hope the illness keeps youstays away and that from now on, you have a strong body and a good mood.
"I hope the illness keeps you away" = I hope the illness prevents you from going somewhere/doing something
"I hope the illness stays away" = I hope the illness doesn't come back
All the best things are full of your life.
I pray for you, and may God bless you.
Take care, h. Happiness and healthiness are coming to you on theiyour way.
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This is such a kind message. I hope the person you are writing to gets well soon!
July 4, 2021
Thank you very much. You are very kind too.
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I am very sorry to hear what you have gone through and I can't imagine how finely you overcome them. I am very sorry to hear what you have gone through, and I can't imagine how |
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That must be really suffering. That must be really "Suffering" is a noun or verb, not an adjective. |
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Sometimes God is unfair because he puts the suffering on the wrong person. Sometimes God is unfair because he puts the suffering on the wrong person. You could capitalize "He"–people often do this with pronouns that refer to God (and Jesus for Christians). |
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So now everything is unimportant for us except health. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We should live happily and healthily. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To keep a healthy body, I now don't drink alcohol, don't smoke cigarettes, sleep early and get up early. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Besides, I ride my bicycle as much as I can. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope the illness keeps you away and from now on you have a strong body and a good mood. I hope the illness "I hope the illness keeps you away" = I hope the illness prevents you from going somewhere/doing something "I hope the illness stays away" = I hope the illness doesn't come back |
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All the best things are full of your life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I pray for you and God bless you. I pray for you, and may God bless you. |
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Take care, happiness and healthiness are coming to you on their way. Take care |
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