Oct. 9, 2023
Journal #18: “How I’m learning English”
Today, I want to tell you about my friend. His name is Amga. We met in university at first course before study. We met on a work, when students come to the university before study and work. You ask me: What type of work we did? We painted walls, floor or celling. It was carry university furniture. In general, we did hard and dirty work and this work we did free for university. Yea, it’s strange thing. I think we didn’t do this free. I tell you in details how we met. I and other future students ended our work and we took a break. I sat down on the bench in the backyard our future university. After 5 minutes, girl set down on my bench. Her name was Mari. We talked about different themes which was interesting for us. I asked Mari when her birthday and she said 1th May. I said her me too. I was born on 1th May. It was so strange. After that, Amga set down and when he set down at once, she said him on this bench can sit only people who was born on 1th May. He smiled and said I was born on 1th May too. It was so strange.
To be continued …
Thanks for reading my journal.
Journal #18: “How I’m learning English”
Today, I want to tell you about my friend.
His name is Amga.
We met in university atin the first course before study.semester before the commencement.
We met on a work, when students come to the university before study and workthey start their studies.
You ask me: What type of work we did? we do?
We painted the walls, floor or celling.
It was carrying university furniture.
In general, we did hard and dirtylabour intensive work and we did this work we did free for the university.
Yea, it’s a strange thing.
I think we didn’t do this for free.
I tell you in details how we met.
I and the other future students ended our work and we took a break.
I sat down on the bench in the backyard of our future university.
After 5 minutes, a girl seat down on my bench.
Her name was Mari.
We talked about different themes which wasopics that interesting fored us.
I asked Mari when her birthday and she said 1th May.
I said to her, me too.
I was born on 1th May.
It was so strange.
After that, Amga seat down and when he seat down at once, she said him onat once that this bench can sitis only for people who wasere born on 1th May.
He smiled and said I was born on 1th May too.
To be continued …
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thanks for reading my journal.
We met inat university at first course before studybefore our course began.
We met on a work programme, whenre students come to the university before studytheir studies begin and work.
You ask me: What type of work did we dido?
We painted the walls, floor ors and cellings.
It wasWe also carryied university furniture.
In general, we did hard and dirty work, and this work we did it for free for the university.
Yeah, it’s a strange thing.
I think we dishouldn’'t dohave done this for free.
I'll tell you in details how we met.
I and some other future students endhad finished our work, and we took a break.
I sat down on the bench in the backyard of our future university.
After 5 minutes, a girl seat down on my bench.
I asked Mari when her birthday was and she said 1the 1st of May.
I said her to her, "me too".
I was also born on 1the 1st of May.
After that, Amga seat down, and when he seat down at once, she said him on this bench can sit she immediately said to him "only people who wasere born on 1th May.the 1st of May can sit on this bench."
He smiled and said "I was born on 1the 1st of May too".
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Today, I want to tell you about my friend. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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His name is Amga. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We met in university at first course before study. We met We met in university |
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We met on a work, when students come to the university before study and work. We met on a work programme, whe We met on a work |
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You ask me: What type of work we did?
You ask me: What type of work we did |
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We painted walls, floor or celling. We painted the walls, floor We painted the walls, floor or celling. |
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It was carry university furniture.
It was carrying university furniture. |
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In general, we did hard and dirty work and this work we did free for university. In general, we did hard and dirty work, and In general, we did hard and |
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Yea, it’s strange thing. Yeah, it’s a strange thing. Yea, it’s a strange thing. |
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I think we didn’t do this free. I think we didn’t do this for free. I think we |
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I tell you in details how we met. I'll tell you in detail I tell you in detail |
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I and other future students ended our work and we took a break. I and some other future students I and the other future students ended our work and we took a break. |
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I sat down on the bench in the backyard our future university. I sat down on the bench in the backyard of our future university. I sat down on the bench in the backyard of our future university. |
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