Jan. 7, 2021
Journal 1/6/2021
I am very sorry for replying to you so late. I don’t know what I have been busy these days, but it’s actually some trifles. The iced lake surface looks like snow fields. If you didn’t tell me, I would not know it’s a lake. Because of global warming, lakes in my area are rarely iced. But in recent days, I suppose it did, because the temperature dropped to minus 7-8 degrees. Even if it’s frozen, it doesn’t look like that in your picture. Its surface is just thin ice, and does not look similar to the snow land in your picture. The last time I walked through an iced lake surface was in 1996 at Chengde Summer Resort. I have forgotten the lake’s name, but I remember exactly I was very scared because I was afraid that the ice would break and I would fall into the lake. If it happened, the result would be extremely dangerous. Finally, the tour guide pulled me to walk through the lake. From what you told me, I think your hometown is poetical: living by the lake; the lake and the town are mutual fusion. This reminds me of Shuanglang old town, Dali, China.
Journal 1/6/2021
I am very sorry for replying to you so late.
I don’t know what I have beenhas kept me busy these days, but it’s actually some trifles.nothing important.
The iced lake surfacefrozen lake looks like a snow field. ¶
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The frozen lakes looks like snow fields.
If you didn’t tell me, I would not know it’s a lake.
Because of global warming, lakes in my area are rarely iced.
But in recent days, I suppose it did recently, because the temperature dropped to minus 7-8 degrees.
Even if it’s frozen, it doesn’t look like that in your picture.
The last time I walked through an iced lake surface was in 1996 at Chengde Summer Resort.
I have forgotten the lake’s name, but I remember exactlyit well. I was very scared because I was afraid that the ice would break and I would fall into the lake.
If ithat had happened, the result would be extremely dangeroushave been terrible.
Finally, the tour guide pulled me to walk throughacross the lake.
From what you told me, I think your hometown is poetical: living by the lake; t. The lake and the town are mutual fusiin unison.
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Great writing! Frozen lakes can be dangerous, it is important to be cautious.
Jan. 7, 2021
Thank you very much
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I am very sorry for replying to you so late. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don’t know what I have been busy these days, but it’s actually some trifles. I don’t know what |
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The iced lake surface looks like snow fields. The |
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If you didn’t tell me, I would not know it’s a lake. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because of global warming, lakes in my area are rarely iced. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But in recent days, I suppose it did, because the temperature dropped to minus 7-8 degrees. But |
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Even if it’s frozen, it doesn’t look like that in your picture. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Its surface is just thin ice, and does not look similar to the snow land in your picture. |
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The last time I walked through an iced lake surface was in 1996 at Chengde Summer Resort. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have forgotten the lake’s name, but I remember exactly I was very scared because I was afraid that the ice would break and I would fall into the lake. I have forgotten the lake’s name, but I remember |
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If it happened, the result would be extremely dangerous. If |
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Finally, the tour guide pulled me to walk through the lake. Finally, the tour guide pulled me to walk |
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From what you told me, I think your hometown is poetical: living by the lake; the lake and the town are mutual fusion. From what you told me, I think your hometown is poetical |
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This reminds me of Shuanglang old town, Dali, China. |
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