Dec. 16, 2020
Journal 16/12/20
At noon, when I arrived at a box lunch store to eat my lunch, the store owner told me the meal was sold out, so I turned to another Chinese fast food store, but when I arrived at the store, it was closed. So I turned to a noodle shop that I used to go to. Fortunately, the shop was still open. Apart from several types of noodles, the shop provided various small dishes. The one I liked the most was braised lamb chops. I used to eat it several times and I thought it was very delicious, although it was very spicy. Today I bought lamb chops again. Its price was 160 yuan per kilogram and that piece of the chops cost me 26 yuan. This time it was still spicy as usual and this also was an aspect I hated the most. I have complained about this to the shop owner several times, but he didn't seem to take my suggestion to decrease the chop’s spicy.
At noon, when I arrived at a box lunch store to eat my lunch, the store owner told me the meal was sold out, so. I turned to another Chinese fast food store instead, but when I arrived at the store, it was closed.
Either sentence is fine, but I think that it is easier to read when it's broken into smaller sentences.
So I turned to a noodle shop that I used to go to.
Fortunately, the shop was still open.
Apart fromIn addition to several types of noodles, the shop provided various small dishes.
I used tohad eaten it several timesbefore and I thought it was very delicious, although it was very spicy.
Today I bought lamb chops again.
Its price was 160 yuan per kilogram and that piece of the chops cost me 26 yuan.
This time it was stilljust as spicy as usual, and this also was an aspecat was the part I hated the most.
I have complained about this to the shop owner several times, but he didn't seem to take my suggestion to decrease the chop’s spicyiness.
Dec. 17, 2020
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Journal 16/12/20 |
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At noon, when I arrived at a box lunch store to eat my lunch, the store owner told me the meal was sold out, so I turned to another Chinese fast food store, but when I arrived at the store, it was closed. At noon, when I arrived at a box lunch store to eat my lunch, the store owner told me the meal was sold out Either sentence is fine, but I think that it is easier to read when it's broken into smaller sentences. |
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So I turned to a noodle shop that I used to go to. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Fortunately, the shop was still open. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Apart from several types of noodles, the shop provided various small dishes.
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The one I liked the most was braised lamb chops. |
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I used to eat it several times and I thought it was very delicious, although it was very spicy. I |
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Today I bought lamb chops again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Its price was 160 yuan per kilogram and that piece of the chops cost me 26 yuan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This time it was still spicy as usual and this also was an aspect I hated the most. This time it was |
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I have complained about this to the shop owner several times, but he didn't seem to take my suggestion to decrease the chop’s spicy. I have complained about this to the shop owner several times, but he didn't seem to take my suggestion to decrease the chop’s spic |
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