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Journal #16: "How I'm Learning English"

I want to tell about the my lovely recipe. It's pasta with chiken and mushrooms. For this meal I need pasta, mushrooms, chiken, an onion, salt, peper, cream. It isn't the classic pasta. It's the my personal recipe looks like the classic Italian pasta. First of all, I chop chiken, the onion and mushrooms. Then, I turn on a plate and put on a pan. After that, I put on some olive oil with the onion on the pan. After 5 minutes, add chiken and mushrooms and fried about 15 minutes. Then, I put on the plate a pot with water. Add pasta in the pot when water had boiled. Cook the paste 5 or 7 minutes. Finnaly I add the pasta to the pan and mix it. Enjoy!

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Journal #16: "How I'm Learning English"

Enjoy!

Thanks for reading my journal.

Journal #16: "How I'm Learning English"


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I want to tell about the my lovely recipe.


I want to tellalk about the my lovely recipe. I want to talk about my lovely recipe.

It's either "tell you" or "talk"; you cannot use "tell" by itself.

I want to tell you about the my lovely recipe. I want to tell you about the my lovely recipe.

It's pasta with chiken and mushrooms.


It's a recipe for pasta with chicken and mushrooms. It's a recipe for pasta with chicken and mushrooms.

The recipe isn't the pasta, it's a *recipe for* the pasta.

For this meal I need pasta, mushrooms, chiken, an onion, salt, peper, cream.


For this meal I need pasta, mushrooms, chicken, anone onion, salt, pepper, and cream. For this meal I need pasta, mushrooms, chicken, one onion, salt, pepper, and cream.

If you're telling us about the recipe, it's more natural to use "you." "You" here wouldn't be used as the regular 2nd person pronoun; it refers to people in general, much like the more formal "one." Because this is a recipe, "one onion" is better than "an onion" (although both are correct). You need "and" before the last item in a list.

For this meal Iyou need pasta, mushrooms, chicken, an onion, salt, peper, cream. For this meal you need pasta, mushrooms, chicken, an onion, salt, peper, cream.

It isn't the classic pasta.


ItThis isn't the classic pasta. This isn't the classic pasta.

It's the my personal recipe looks like the classic Italian pasta.


It's the my personal recipe, which looks like the classic Italian pasta. It's my personal recipe, which looks like the classic Italian pasta.

You don't use articles before "my."

It's the my personal recipe, although it looks like thea classic Italian pasta. It's my personal recipe, although it looks like a classic Italian pasta.

The classic Italian pasta implies there is only one classic Italian pasta. Use “a” an indefinite article

First of all, I chop chiken, the onion and mushrooms.


First of all, I chop the chicken, the onion, and the mushrooms. First of all, I chop the chicken, the onion, and the mushrooms.

You can also say "the chicken, onion, and mushrooms" because when you have a list, you can omit the "the" in subsequent items. However, if you choose to put "the" for "the onions," you also need to put it in front of "mushrooms."

First of all, I chop the chiken, the onion and mushrooms. First of all, chop the chiken, onion and mushrooms.

Then, I turn on a plate and put on a pan.


Then, I turn on a platlight up the stove and put on a pan. Then, I light up the stove and put on a pan.

I'm assuming this is what you meant.

Then, I turn on a platthe stove and put on a pan. Then, turn on the stove and put on a pan.

You can turn on a stove or a hot plate

After that, I put on some olive oil with the onion on the pan.


After that, I put on some olive oil withand the onion on the pan. After that, I put on some olive oil and the onion on the pan.

After that, I put on some olive oil withand fry the onion on the pan. After that, put on some olive and fry the onion.

After 5 minutes, add chiken and mushrooms and fried about 15 minutes.


After 5 minutes, add the chicken and mushrooms and friedy for about 15 minutes. After 5 minutes, add the chicken and mushrooms and fry for about 15 minutes.

After 5 minutes, add chiken and mushrooms and friedy for about 15 minutes. After 5 minutes, add chiken and mushrooms and fry for about 15 minutes.

Fried is the past tense. Fry is present tense

Then, I put on the plate a pot with water.


Then, I put on the plate a pot with watera pot of water on the stove. Then, I put a pot of water on the stove.

"I put on the stove a pot of water" is also fine, but rather formal.

Then, I put on the platstove a pot with water. Then, put on the stove a pot with water.

Add pasta in the pot when water had boiled.


AI add pasta into the pot when the water hadstarts boileding. I add pasta to the pot when the water starts boiling.

It should be "water has boiled," not "water had boiled"; however, both are kind of weird here. "when the water comes to a boil" also works.

Add pasta in the pot when water hads boiled. Add pasta in the pot when water has boiled.

Cook the paste 5 or 7 minutes.


Cook the pastea for 5 tor 7 minutes. Cook the pasta for 5 to 7 minutes.

5 or 7 = 5 minutes/7 minutes 5 to 7 = between 5 and 7 minutes

Cook the pastea for 5 or 7 minutes. Cook the pasta for 5 or 7 minutes.

Finnaly I add the pasta to the pan and mix it.


Finnally, I add the pasta to the pan and mix it. Finally, I add the pasta to the pan and mix it.

Finnaly Ially, add the pasta to the pan and mix it. Finally, add the pasta to the pan and mix it.

Enjoy!


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