May 18, 2021
Journal
The tourist area of Mammoth is located in the Zhalainuoer District, Hulunbeier City, Inner Mongolia. It covers an area of 1 square kilometers and gained the honor of the biggest statue group of mammoth in the world from Shanghai Guinness head office in 2013. The tourist area has 93 paleontological sculptures in total. Among them, there are 87 mammoth sculptures. I remember I sent you some pictures taken there. The blue skies are like washed and the white clouds are very low. It looks really amazing. Besides it is very near to Manzhouli port, you can see a great national gate bordering Russia. So if you have time, welcome to China, which is a beautiful country worth visiting.
The tourist area of Mammoth is located in the Zhalainuoer District, Hulunbeier City, Inner Mongolia.
It covers an area of 1one square kilometers and gained the honor of being named the biglargest mammoth statue group of mammoth in the world from Shanghai Guinness head office in 2013.
When writing numbers, at least in formal English, we tend to spell out the entire number.
"gained the honor" needs a verb to connect to the act of being "the largest mammoth statue group", therefore I added "being named." other possible connecting verbs might have been "being awarded" or "being recognized as"
last, you used biggest to describe a group. usually, we describe a group as small or large, though if you said big or small a native English speaker would understand you.
The tourist area has 93 paleontological sculptures in total.
Among them, there are 87 mammoth sculptures.
I remember I sent you some pictures taken there.
The blue skies are like washed and the white clouds are very low.
I am not sure what you mean by "like washed"... "washed" is not a noun... in this construction we are using like + noun
It looks really amazing.
BesidesAdditionally, it is very nearclose to Manzhouli port, you can see a great national gate bordering Russia.
So if you have time, [must add a noun] welcome to China, which is a beautiful country worth visiting.
in Chinese we can just say 你有时间的话，欢迎来中国
In English, we need a noun at each phrase. In this case, you can say either:
"So if you have time, you are welcome to come to China."
OR
"So if you have time, I welcome you to come to China."
The noun in this case would either be "you" or "I"
May 20, 2021
Thank You very much
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The tourist area of Mammoth is located in the Zhalainuoer District, Hulunbeier City, Inner Mongolia. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It covers an area of 1 square kilometers and gained the honor of the biggest statue group of mammoth in the world from Shanghai Guinness head office in 2013. It covers an area of When writing numbers, at least in formal English, we tend to spell out the entire number. "gained the honor" needs a verb to connect to the act of being "the largest mammoth statue group", therefore I added "being named." other possible connecting verbs might have been "being awarded" or "being recognized as" last, you used biggest to describe a group. usually, we describe a group as small or large, though if you said big or small a native English speaker would understand you. |
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Among them, there are 87 mammoth sculptures. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I remember I sent you some pictures taken there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The blue skies are like washed and the white clouds are very low. The blue skies are like washed and the white clouds are very low. I am not sure what you mean by "like washed"... "washed" is not a noun... in this construction we are using like + noun |
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It looks really amazing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Besides it is very near to Manzhouli port, you can see a great national gate bordering Russia.
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So if you have time, welcome to China, which is a beautiful country worth visiting. So if you have time, [must add a noun] welcome to China, which is a beautiful country worth visiting. in Chinese we can just say 你有时间的话，欢迎来中国 In English, we need a noun at each phrase. In this case, you can say either: "So if you have time, you are welcome to come to China." OR "So if you have time, I welcome you to come to China." The noun in this case would either be "you" or "I" |
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