Jan. 15, 2021
In Chinese, the English phrase "road trip" means自驾游. A Road Trip needs not only money but also time. I think of a Chinese song named "I want to go to Guilin". The song's lyrics are like this: "When I have time, but no money; when I have money, but no time." However, road trips are very popular in China. For me, I have to work every day during work time, and the weekend only has two days off. I think it is too short for a road trip. A couple years ago, I took road trips several times. Although each trip was in a hurry, it gave me a good feeling. Maybe it is because of my age, I am not interested in going out often now.
A Rroad Ttrip needs not only money but also time.
Don't need to capitalize "road trip" unless it's referring to the title of something.
The song's lyrics arego like this: "When I have time, but no money; when I have money, but no time."
"Are like this" works, although "go" or "goes" are typically used when referring to a process or song.
"It goes like like this:"
Although each trip was in a hurryied, it gave me a good feeling.
"Hurried" is another way of saying "in a hurry". Could also use "rushed" to describe the trips instead of "hurried".
Maybe it is because of my age, but I am not interested in going out often now.
"but" is a conjunction linking the two sentences together
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Journal 15/01/21
In Chinese, tThe English phrase "road trip" means自驾游is called 自驾游 in Chinese.
A Rroad Ttrip needs nbot onlyh money but alsoand time.
"not only money but also time" is correct, but feels forced.
I think of a Chinese song named "I want to go to Guilin".
This feels completely out of context. It could begin "This dilemma reminds me of a Chinese song...".
The song's lyrics are like this: "When I have time, butI have no money; when I have money, butI have no time."
However, road trips are very popular in China.
For me, I have to work every day during work timeday, and on the weekend I only hasve two days off.
I think it is too short for a road trip.
A couple of years ago, I took road trips several timewent on several road trips.
I don't think "A couple years ago" would be considered correct in Australia (mostly British English). I'm not sure if it's okay in US English.
Although each trip was in a hurry, it gave me a good feelingrushed, it was a good experience.
Or "it felt good".
Maybe it is because of my age, I am not longer interested in going out often now.
Consider "Maybe because of my age, I am no longer interested in going on road trips."
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In Chinese, the English phrase "road trip" means自驾游.
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A Road Trip needs not only money but also time. A "not only money but also time" is correct, but feels forced. A Don't need to capitalize "road trip" unless it's referring to the title of something. |
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I think of a Chinese song named "I want to go to Guilin". I think of a Chinese song named "I want to go to Guilin". This feels completely out of context. It could begin "This dilemma reminds me of a Chinese song...". |
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The song's lyrics are like this: "When I have time, but no money; when I have money, but no time." The song's lyrics are like this: "When I have time, The song's lyrics "Are like this" works, although "go" or "goes" are typically used when referring to a process or song. "It goes like like this:" |
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However, road trips are very popular in China. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For me, I have to work every day during work time, and the weekend only has two days off. For me, I have to work every |
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I think it is too short for a road trip. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A couple years ago, I took road trips several times. A couple of years ago, I I don't think "A couple years ago" would be considered correct in Australia (mostly British English). I'm not sure if it's okay in US English. |
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Although each trip was in a hurry, it gave me a good feeling. Although each trip was Or "it felt good". Although each trip was "Hurried" is another way of saying "in a hurry". Could also use "rushed" to describe the trips instead of "hurried". |
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Maybe it is because of my age, I am not interested in going out often now. Maybe Consider "Maybe because of my age, I am no longer interested in going on road trips." Maybe it is because of my age, but I am not interested in going out often now. "but" is a conjunction linking the two sentences together |
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