Dec. 27, 2024
Journal
Today is the last Friday of December, 2024.
I’m going to hang out with my friends at dinner. We’ll meet at eight at the studio.
To not make much trashes, we are going to bring our own tablewares and glasses.
One of my friend called it “Zero Waste Party” and I liked it.
It is almost at the end of the year. Every year in this season I ruminate the year. I laughed a lot and cried a lot, as always.
오늘은 2024년 12월의 마지막 금요일이다.
나는 저녁에 친구들과 놀기로 했다. 우리는 작업실에서 8시에 만날 것이다.
쓰레기를 많이 만들지 않으려고 우리는 각자 식기와 잔을 챙기기로 했다.
친구는 이걸 ‘제로웨이스트 파티’라고 말했고 나는 그게 마음에 들었다.
한 해가 다 끝나간다. 매년 이맘때 즈음 나는 한 해를 돌아보며 반추한다. 늘 그랬듯, 많이 웃고울었다.
Today is the last Friday of December, 2024.
We’ll meet at eight at thea studio.
since there's no specific studio being indicated, i would recommend using "a" since more general
To not make muchany trashes, we are going to bring our own tablewares and glasses.
the plural form of trash is the same as its singular (the word "trash" can refer to both a single piece or multiple pieces of trash). same with tableware.
Another suggestion I have for the first part is to write it as "To reduce waste" - much more succinct!
One of my friend called it “Zero Waste Party” and I liked it.
It is almost at the end of the year.
Every year in this season I ruminate theeflect about the past year.
"Ruminate" has a negative connotation, I think "reflect about" or "think about" suits your journal more.
I laughed a lot and cried a lot, as always.
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Hope you have a great new year!
Dec. 30, 2024
Thank you so much, it helped me a lot.
Happy New Year! May you have a wonderful year 2025
Journal
Today is the last Friday of December, 2024.
I’m going to hang out with my friends at dinner.
We’ll meet at eight at the studio.
To not make much trasheswaste excessively, we are going to bring our own tablewares and glasses.
One of my friend called it a “Zero Waste Party” and I liked it.
It is almost at the end of the year.
Every year in this season, I ruminate about the year.
I laughed a lot and cried a lot, as always.
Dec. 30, 2024
Thank u so much!!
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To not make much trashes, we are going to bring our own tablewares and glasses. To not To not make the plural form of trash is the same as its singular (the word "trash" can refer to both a single piece or multiple pieces of trash). same with tableware. Another suggestion I have for the first part is to write it as "To reduce waste" - much more succinct! |
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It is almost at the end of the year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It is almost |
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Every year in this season I ruminate the year. Every year in this season, I ruminate about the year. Every year in this season I r "Ruminate" has a negative connotation, I think "reflect about" or "think about" suits your journal more. |
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