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March 11, 2021

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Last night in a chat room on HelloTalk, I met a lady whose name is Annie. She gives me an impression of motivation and positive feelings. From chatting with her, I know that she is from Xinyang, Henan province. She currently works in a hotel in Beijing and her mom and her family also live in Beijing. She used to work in the hotel industry in southern China cities, like Shenzhen, Guangzhou etc. I think she is a hard working person. During the chatting, she is very positive and wants to talk more. Meanwhile, I think her oral English is good because she can express herself clearly and she can understand all of what I said. Her spirit of learning English touched me. I think I should talk to her more, so I can learn a lot from her.

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Last night in a chat room on HelloTalk, I met a lady whose name is Annie.

She gives me an impression of being full of motivation and positive feelings.

From chatting with her, I knowlearned that she is from Xinyang, in Henan province.

She currently works in a hotel in Beijing and her mom and her family also live in Beijing.

She used to work in the hotel industry in southern China cities, like Shenzhen, Guangzhou etc.

I think she is a hard working person.

During the chatting, she iswas/seemed very positive and wants to talk more.

Meanwhile, I think her oral English is good because she can express herself clearly and she can understand all of what I said.

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Jack

March 12, 2021

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Thank you very much.

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Last night in a chat room on HelloTalk, I met a lady whose name is Annie.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She gives me an impression of motivation and positive feelings.


She gives me an impression of being full of motivation and positive feelings.

From chatting with her, I know that she is from Xinyang, Henan province.


From chatting with her, I knowlearned that she is from Xinyang, in Henan province.

She currently works in a hotel in Beijing and her mom and her family also live in Beijing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She used to work in the hotel industry in southern China cities, like Shenzhen, Guangzhou etc.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think she is a hard working person.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

During the chatting, she is very positive and wants to talk more.


During the chatting, she iswas/seemed very positive and wants to talk more.

Meanwhile, I think her oral English is good because she can express herself clearly and she can understand all of what I said.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Her spirit of learning English touched me.


I think I should talk to her more, so I can learn a lot from her.


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