Dec. 13, 2020
Journal 12/23/20
The temperature range today is between -3 to 6 Celsius and now it is 1. During the former days, I didn’t feel cold wearing a down jacket. On the contrary, I felt a little warmer. But today when I got outside, I felt very cold. The wind was chilly and you couldn’t even expose your hands. So I almost stayed home the whole day. Tomorrow is Monday. I have to work by bike. I think it will be a cold trip. Anyway I have gloves, that won’t be too bad.
Journal 12/23/20
The temperature range today is between -3 to 6 degrees Celsius and right now it is 1at 1 degree Celsius.
During the former days, I didn’t feel cold wearing a down jacket.
On the contrary, I felt a little warmer.
But today when I got outside, I felt very cold.
The wind was chilly and you couldn’t even expose your hands.
So I almost stayed home the whole day.
Tomorrow is Monday.
I have to work by bike.
I think it will be a cold trip.
Anyway I have gloves, that won’t be too bad.
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Dec. 13, 2020
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The temperature range today is between -3 to 6 Celsius and now it is 1. The temperature range today is between -3 to 6 degrees Celsius and right now it is |
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During the former days, I didn’t feel cold wearing a down jacket. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On the contrary, I felt a little warmer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But today when I got outside, I felt very cold. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The wind was chilly and you couldn’t even expose your hands. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I almost stayed home the whole day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think it will be a cold trip. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Anyway I have gloves, that won’t be too bad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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