Dec. 2, 2020
Journal 12/2/20
I usually pick my ear by myself, but one day I decided to go to a professional ear nursing store to pick my ears. In our city, picking ears once costs 45 to 50 CN yuan at a professional ear nursing store. It is very expensive. If you do it in a civilian barber store, the least price will be low to 5 CN yuan. Since I picked my ear at that time, I often felt my ear itchy. This situation has lasted about two or three months or so, and has not turned out to be better, so I have to go to a hospital to check it out. The doctor asked me if I had my ears picked somewhere. When I said yes, he told me that it was the fungi that infected my ears and he told me not to have my ears picked anymore. He gave me a box of ointment to treat fungi. After about ten days of treatment, my ears were cured.
I usually pickclean my ear bys myself, but one day I decided to go to a professional ear nursing store to pickclean my ears.
In our city, pickcleaning ears once costs 45 to 50 CN yuan at a professional ear nursing store.
If you do it in a civilian barber store, the least price will be lowprice is lowered to 5 CN yuan.
SEver since I pickehad my ear ats cleaned that time, I often felt my ear was itchy.
Saying "I cleaned (picked) my ear" means that you did it yourself. Because you are talking about the store doing it for you, you should phrase it in passive voice.
This situation has lasted about two or three months or so, and has not turned out to begotten better, so I haved to go to a hospital to check it out.
"about" and "or so" both serve the same purpose, so you only need one.
The doctor asked me if I had my ears pickcleaned somewhere.
When I said yes, he told me that it was the fungi that infected my ears and he told me not to have my ears pickcleaned anymore.
Feedback
Biggest change was "picking" ears to cleaning ears. I think picking conveys to the audience what you mean, and the tool used to clean ears is called an "ear pick", but I think most people do not actually use the phrase "picking" in daily life, and cleaning sounds more natural to me at least.
Dec. 2, 2020
Thank you very much.
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Journal 12/2/20 |
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I usually pick my ear by myself, but one day I decided to go to a professional ear nursing store to pick my ears. I usually |
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In our city, picking ears once costs 45 to 50 CN yuan at a professional ear nursing store. In our city, |
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It is very expensive. |
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If you do it in a civilian barber store, the least price will be low to 5 CN yuan. If you do it in a civilian barber store, the |
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Since I picked my ear at that time, I often felt my ear itchy.
Saying "I cleaned (picked) my ear" means that you did it yourself. Because you are talking about the store doing it for you, you should phrase it in passive voice. |
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This situation has lasted about two or three months or so, and has not turned out to be better, so I have to go to a hospital to check it out. This situation has lasted about two or three months "about" and "or so" both serve the same purpose, so you only need one. |
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The doctor asked me if I had my ears picked somewhere. The doctor asked me if I had my ears |
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When I said yes, he told me that it was the fungi that infected my ears and he told me not to have my ears picked anymore. When I said yes, he told me that it was |
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He gave me a box of ointment to treat fungi. |
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After about ten days of treatment, my ears were cured. |
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