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Dec. 14, 2020

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Journal 12/14/20

Today is a sunny, dry but cold day. The temperature range is between -5 to 2 degrees, and right now it’s -1 degrees. I cycled to my office this morning. On my way, I saw many fallen leaves on the roadside, but I didn’t know what trees they were. I wear a down jacket and a pair of thick warm pants. In the former days, with these clothes I couldn’t feel cold at all. On the contrary, I felt warm. But today during my ride, my body felt chilly. It seemed that the cold wind could directly touch my body. However, all the way I was pleasant, especially when I breathe fresh air. Finally, when I arrived at my work place, I got a little bit sweaty.

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Journal 12/14/20

Today is a sunny, dry but cold day.

The temperature range is between -5 to 2 degrees, and right now, it’s -1 degrees.

I cycled to my office this morning.

On my way, I saw many fallen leaves on the roadside, but I didn’t know what trees they were.

I wearore a down jacket and a pair of thick warm pants.

In the former dayspast, with these clothes, I couldn’t feel cold at all.

On the contrary, I felt warm.

But today during my ride, my body felt chilly.

It seemed thatlike the cold wind could directly touch my body.

However, all thduring the entire way, I was pleasanthappy, especially when I breathed fresh air.

Finally, when I arrived at my work place, I got a little bit sweaty.

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Jack

Dec. 14, 2020

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Thank you very much.

Journal 12/14/20


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Today is a sunny, dry but cold day.


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The temperature range is between -5 to 2 degrees, and right now it’s -1 degrees.


The temperature range is between -5 to 2 degrees, and right now, it’s -1 degrees.

I cycled to my office this morning.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

On my way, I saw many fallen leaves on the roadside, but I didn’t know what trees they were.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wear a down jacket and a pair of thick warm pants.


I wearore a down jacket and a pair of thick warm pants.

In the former days, with these clothes I couldn’t feel cold at all.


In the former dayspast, with these clothes, I couldn’t feel cold at all.

On the contrary, I felt warm.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But today during my ride, my body felt chilly.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It seemed that the cold wind could directly touch my body.


It seemed thatlike the cold wind could directly touch my body.

However, all the way I was pleasant, especially when I breathe fresh air.


However, all thduring the entire way, I was pleasanthappy, especially when I breathed fresh air.

Finally, when I arrived at my work place, I got a little bit sweaty.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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