Dec. 13, 2020
Journal 12/13/20
This morning, I made breakfast by myself. I made three of them: stewed egg paste, boiled sweet potatoes and soybean milk. Break the eggs into a plate and stir them, then add a certain water and salt. Put it in a pot and boil it until it is done. Wash the sweet potatoes clean and put them in a pot, and add the proper amount of water, then boil them. Get some soybeans and wash them, then put them in the soybean milk machine, add the proper amount of water, then turn on the machine. The machine is automatic, it will stop when the soybean milk is well cooked. This is a simple breakfast, but it is healthy and nutritious.
Journal 12/13/20
This morning, I made breakfast by myself.
I made three of tdishems: stewed egg paste, boiled sweet potatoes and soybean milk.
"of them" refers to "breakfasts", so by saying "I made three of them" you are actually saying "I made three breakfasts", which doesn't make sense.
Break thsome eggs into a plate and stir them, then add a certainsome water and salt.
The phrase "the eggs" must refer to some eggs you have previously discussed. You haven't done so: the egg paste dish is not a collection of eggs.
Put ithem in a pot and boil ithem until it isthey are done.
Wash the sweet potatoes clean and put them in a pot, and add the proper amount of water, then boil them.
Get some soybeans and wash them, then put them in the soybean milk machine, a. Add the proper amount of water, then turn on the machine.
The machine is automatic, it will stop when the soybean milk is well cooked.
This is a simple breakfast, but it is healthy and nutritious.
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Very good overall. Most errors have to do with referencing objects in previous sentences.
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I made three of them: stewed egg paste, boiled sweet potatoes and soybean milk. I made three "of them" refers to "breakfasts", so by saying "I made three of them" you are actually saying "I made three breakfasts", which doesn't make sense. |
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Journal 12/13/20 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This morning, I made breakfast by myself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Break the eggs into a plate and stir them, then add a certain water and salt. Break The phrase "the eggs" must refer to some eggs you have previously discussed. You haven't done so: the egg paste dish is not a collection of eggs. |
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Put it in a pot and boil it until it is done. Put |
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Wash the sweet potatoes clean and put them in a pot, and add the proper amount of water, then boil them. Wash the sweet potatoes clean and put them in a pot, |
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Get some soybeans and wash them, then put them in the soybean milk machine, add the proper amount of water, then turn on the machine. Get some soybeans and wash them, then put them in the soybean milk machine |
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The machine is automatic, it will stop when the soybean milk is well cooked. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is a simple breakfast, but it is healthy and nutritious. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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