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Journal 12/11/20

My middle school was in my small hometown and it was 1.5 kilometers from my village. During middle school, l lived in school. Sometimes when I wanted to go home I had to go on foot. Our classroom and dormitory were in bad condition and there were only several simple bungalows. There were about 60 students in my class and three of these kinds of classes each year. Because grade 6, 7,8 (at that time, our primary school only had five grades) were in the school at the same time, so the school had 9 classes, which means more than 500 students in the school then. We took 11 courses and they were Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry, Biology, Politics, History, Geography, Sports and Music. I took 9 courses (except sports and music) when attending the high school entrance examination.

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Journal 12/11/20

My middle school was in my small hometown, and it was 1.5 kilometers from my village.

During middle school, l lived inat school.

Sometimes when I wanted to go home, I had to go onby foot.

Our classroom and dormitory were in bad condition, and there were only several simple bungalows.

There were about 60 students in my class and three of these kinds of classes each year.

Because gGrade 6, 7, and 8 (at that time, our primary school only had five grades) were in the school at the same time, so the school had 9nine classes, which means. This means that there were more than 500 students in the school then.

I took 9 courses (except sports and music) when attendtaking the high school entrance examination.

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Jack

Dec. 11, 2020

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Thank you very much.

Journal 12/11/20


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My middle school was in my small hometown and it was 1.5 kilometers from my village.


My middle school was in my small hometown, and it was 1.5 kilometers from my village.

During middle school, l lived in school.


During middle school, l lived inat school.

Sometimes when I wanted to go home I had to go on foot.


Sometimes when I wanted to go home, I had to go onby foot.

Our classroom and dormitory were in bad condition and there were only several simple bungalows.


Our classroom and dormitory were in bad condition, and there were only several simple bungalows.

There were about 60 students in my class and three of these kinds of classes each year.


There were about 60 students in my class and three of these kinds of classes each year.

Because grade 6, 7,8 (at that time, our primary school only had five grades) were in the school at the same time, so the school had 9 classes, which means more than 500 students in the school then.


Because gGrade 6, 7, and 8 (at that time, our primary school only had five grades) were in the school at the same time, so the school had 9nine classes, which means. This means that there were more than 500 students in the school then.

We took 11 courses and they were Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry, Biology, Politics, History, Geography, Sports and Music.


I took 9 courses (except sports and music) when attending the high school entrance examination.


I took 9 courses (except sports and music) when attendtaking the high school entrance examination.

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