Dec. 10, 2020
Journal 12/10/20
In our region decades ago, every village had a small river that surrounded the village, and there was only an entrance to the village, and the entrance was all located in the southern part of the village. I heard from the old people that the small river is dogged to protect the village. The small river was not too wide, it seemed only 5 to 10 meters. But at that time, there was a lot of water in the river and many reeds grew up in the river. Our village was a production team then, as a production content, the team raised fish in the river every year. When summer arrives, we could see fish eating the reed leaves and the Chu trees fruits (because there were many Chu trees on the river side) Sometimes in the early morning we could see a group of fish closing to the water surface and breathing with a big mouth. When the mid-autumn festival arrives, this is the fishing season. When adults go fishing in the river with nets, you could see many black carp and silver carp flying out of the water. That kind of scene was really shocking and it was the happiest moment for our children. But many years ago, the river had dried up and my village was not what it used to be. All that I said can’t be seen anymore.
Journal 12/10/20
In our region decades ago, every village had a small river that surrounded the village, and there was only anone entrance to the village, and all the entrance was alls were located in the southern part of the village.
Assuming that you meant that the village only had one entrance
I heard from the oelderly people that the small river is dogged towill always protect the village.
'dogged' is a bit strange in this context.
The small river was not too wide, it seemed to be only 5 to 10 meters across.
But at that time, there was a lot of water in the river and many reeds grew up infrom the river.
When summer arrives, we could see fish eating the reed leaves and the Chu trees fruits (because there were many Chu trees on the river side). Sometimes in the early morning we could see a group of fish closinge to the water's surface and breathing with atheir big mouths open.
When the mid-autumn festival arrives, this is the fishing season.
When adults go fishing in the river with nets, you could see many black carp and silver carps flying out of the water.
That kind of scene was really shocking and it was the happiest moment for our children.
But many years ago, the river had dried up and my village was not what it used to be.
All that I have said can’t be seen anymore.
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Wow, really interesting journal. It's a shame that the river's dried up. I wonder if people have been moving out to find jobs elsewhere?
Dec. 10, 2020
I heard from the oelderly people that the small river is dogged towill always protect the village.
I mean dug (dig)
Dec. 10, 2020
No, people still live in there, but the young people are all work in other cities, just old people left in the village as well as part of children, as long as they don’t go with their parents. Thank you for your corrections.
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In our region decades ago, every village had a small river that surrounded the village, and there was only an entrance to the village, and the entrance was all located in the southern part of the village. In our region decades ago, every village had a small river that surrounded the village, and there was only Assuming that you meant that the village only had one entrance |
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I heard from the old people that the small river is dogged to protect the village. I heard from the 'dogged' is a bit strange in this context. |
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The small river was not too wide, it seemed only 5 to 10 meters. The small river was not too wide, it seemed to be only 5 to 10 meters across. |
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But at that time, there was a lot of water in the river and many reeds grew up in the river. But at that time, there was a lot of water in the river and many reeds grew up |
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Our village was a production team then, as a production content, the team raised fish in the river every year. |
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When summer arrives, we could see fish eating the reed leaves and the Chu trees fruits (because there were many Chu trees on the river side) Sometimes in the early morning we could see a group of fish closing to the water surface and breathing with a big mouth. When summer arrives, we could see fish eating the reed leaves and the Chu trees fruits (because there were many Chu trees on the river side). Sometimes in the early morning we could see a group of fish clos |
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When the mid-autumn festival arrives, this is the fishing season. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When adults go fishing in the river with nets, you could see many black carp and silver carp flying out of the water. When adults go fishing in the river with nets, you could see many black |
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That kind of scene was really shocking and it was the happiest moment for our children. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But many years ago, the river had dried up and my village was not what it used to be. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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All that I said can’t be seen anymore. All that I have said can’t be seen anymore. |
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