Dec. 8, 2020
Journal 12/09/20
I had a slingshot when I was a child, and it was made by myself. Let me talk about how to make a slingshot. First, find a tree branch and to make sure it is moderate thickness. Secondly, buy some rubber bands. Third, find a piece of leather and make a small leather pocket. In the end, join the branch and the leather pocket together through the rubber bands. Now it is done. There used to be many birds in the countryside. You could shoot them with a slingshot. You just needed to pick up a gravel and put it in the leather pocket, and then pull the rubber bands, shot! I used to play the slingshot all day long, even when I attended the middle school entrance exam, I still put the slingshot in my pocket. Although I was very interested in playing it, it seems there were fewer birds I actually shot down.
I had a slingshot when I was a child, and it wasI made byit myself.
it's not wrong but it sounds a little unnatural
First, find a tree branch and to make sure it is moderate thickness.
Secondly, buy some rubber bands.
if you're going to use secondly, write "firstly" and "thirdly" as well but it sounds a bit too formal and no one really uses them
You just needed to pick up asome gravel and, put it in the leather pocket, and then pull the rubber bands, shot!
gravel is plural :)
I used to play with the slingshot all day long, e. Even when I attended the middle school entrance exam, I still put the slingshot in my pocket.
Although I was very interested in playing with it, it seems there were fewer birds I actually shot down.
Dec. 9, 2020
Thank you very much.
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Journal 12/09/20 |
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I had a slingshot when I was a child, and it was made by myself. I had a slingshot when I was a child, and it's not wrong but it sounds a little unnatural |
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Let me talk about how to make a slingshot. |
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First, find a tree branch and to make sure it is moderate thickness. First, find a tree branch and |
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Secondly, buy some rubber bands. Second if you're going to use secondly, write "firstly" and "thirdly" as well but it sounds a bit too formal and no one really uses them |
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Third, find a piece of leather and make a small leather pocket. |
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In the end, join the branch and the leather pocket together through the rubber bands. |
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Now it is done. |
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There used to be many birds in the countryside. |
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You could shoot them with a slingshot. |
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You just needed to pick up a gravel and put it in the leather pocket, and then pull the rubber bands, shot! You just needed to pick up gravel is plural :) |
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I used to play the slingshot all day long, even when I attended the middle school entrance exam, I still put the slingshot in my pocket. I used to play with the slingshot all day long |
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Although I was very interested in playing it, it seems there were fewer birds I actually shot down. Although I was very interested in playing with it, it seems there were fewer birds I actually shot down. |
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