Dec. 9, 2020
It always becomes foggy when winter comes in our area and it reminds me of those old days. Because our hometown is located in the northern part of China, it is very cold during winter days. All the trees have fallen their leaves, all the crops have harvested, there is a depression in the air. When it snows, the temperature drops suddenly. The next morning, there is a lot of long ice in the rafters. You can’t even reach out your hands and people seem to all lose their energy. The whole winter has passed with depression. Every year is the same. This is what the weather in the winter is like in our area
It always becomes foggy when winter comes into our area and it reminds me of those old days.
Because ourmy hometown is located in the northern part of China, it is very cold during the winter days.
All the trees have fallendropped their leaves, all the crops have been harvested, and there is a sense of depression in the air.
Or: "All the leaves have fallen from the trees, all the crops have been harvested, and there is a sense of depression hanging heavy in the air.
When it snows, the temperature drops suddenly.
The next morning, there isare a lot of long ice inicles hanging from the rafters.
You can’t even reach out your hands and people seem to all lose their energy.
Correct, but more natural would be: You can't even lift your hand, and everyone seems to have lost their energy.
The whole winter has passed withs in a fog of depression.
or: "a dark cloud of depression"
Every year is the same.
This is what the weather in the wintinter weather is like in our area
Or: "This is what the winter is like in our area"
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It always becomes foggy when winter comes in our area and it reminds me of those old days. It always becomes foggy when winter comes |
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Because our hometown is located in the northern part of China, it is very cold during winter days. Because |
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All the trees have fallen their leaves, all the crops have harvested, there is a depression in the air. All the trees have Or: "All the leaves have fallen from the trees, all the crops have been harvested, and there is a sense of depression hanging heavy in the air. |
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When it snows, the temperature drops suddenly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The next morning, there is a lot of long ice in the rafters. The next morning, there |
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You can’t even reach out your hands and people seem to all lose their energy. You can’t even reach out your hands and people seem to all lose their energy. Correct, but more natural would be: You can't even lift your hand, and everyone seems to have lost their energy. |
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The whole winter has passed with depression. The whole winter or: "a dark cloud of depression" |
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Every year is the same. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is what the weather in the winter is like in our area This is what the w Or: "This is what the winter is like in our area" |
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