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Journal 12/07/20

With the development of people’s living conditions, now all the hospitals are constructed with high standards. Sickrooms’ ground paved with floor tile, as well as the wall. Besides, there is central air conditioning, independent bathroom, wall cabinets, TV, and many medical facilities in the room. My mom was in good condition, the doctor said, and a few days later, we could be discharged from the hospital.

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With the developimprovement of people’s living conditions, now all theall hospitals are now constructed with high standards.

Sickrooms’ ground paved with floor tile, as well as the wallThe floor as well as the wall are paved with tiles in the patients' rooms.

Besides, there isThey also provide central air -conditioning, independentprivate bathrooms, wall cabinets, TV's, and many medical facilitiesequipment in the room.

My mom wais staying in one of the rooms right now. She is in good condition, and the doctor said, and that in a few days later, w, she could be discharged from the hospital.

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Jack

Dec. 7, 2020

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Thank you very much.

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nschafer888

Dec. 7, 2020

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I should have corrected high standards to "higher standards", otherwise, it is implied that prior to now, the hospitals had low standards.

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Jack

Dec. 7, 2020

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I see. Thank you very much.

Journal 12/07/20


With the development of people’s living conditions, now all the hospitals are constructed with high standards.


With the developimprovement of people’s living conditions, now all theall hospitals are now constructed with high standards.

Sickrooms’ ground paved with floor tile, as well as the wall.


Sickrooms’ ground paved with floor tile, as well as the wallThe floor as well as the wall are paved with tiles in the patients' rooms.

Besides, there is central air conditioning, independent bathroom, wall cabinets, TV, and many medical facilities in the room.


Besides, there isThey also provide central air -conditioning, independentprivate bathrooms, wall cabinets, TV's, and many medical facilitiesequipment in the room.

My mom was in good condition, the doctor said, and a few days later, we could be discharged from the hospital.


My mom wais staying in one of the rooms right now. She is in good condition, and the doctor said, and that in a few days later, w, she could be discharged from the hospital.

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