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Bair

Oct. 2, 2023

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Journal #12: "How I'm Learning English"

I told you how I watched the movie "Shrek" at last journal. I forgot to tell you about one more English serial. It name is "Blue Mountain State". I started to watch it at last weekend. I saw first three series. It was so funny and giggle. I think I can't told about the story or some interesting moments, because it's PG-16. So, if you want to watch this serial, you're welcome. You can find this in intenet.

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I told you how I watched the movie "Shrek" atin my last journal.

I forgot to tell you about one more English seriales.

Its name is "Blue Mountain State".

I started to watch it aing it last weekend.

I saw the first three seriepisodes.

Series is for the whole show, episode is for each smaller part.

It was so funny and I giggled.

Giggled is like a small laugh, maybe "I laughed" would be more natural ;)

I think I can't toldell you about the story or some of the interesting moments, because it's PG-16.

So, if you want to watch this seriales, you're welcome.

You can find this init on the internet.

Thanks for raeading my journal.

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Sounds fun! I will check out the series.

I told you how I watched the movie "Shrek" atin my last journal.

"At" is more for a place. "In my" is correct in this instance.

I forgot to tell you about one more English seriales.

It's name is "Blue Mountain State".

I started to watch it at last weekend.

No need for the "at".

I saw the first three series.

I think you mean episodes?

It was so funny and giggle.

To giggle is a verb to laugh in a girlish way.

I don't think I can't told tell you about the story or some interesting moments, from it because it's PG-16.

So, if you want to watch this seriales, you're welcome. to!

You can find this init on the internet.

Thanks for raeading my journal.

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paprikustjornur

Oct. 5, 2023

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It's name is "Blue Mountain State".

Its (there is no apostrophe for possession with its, only when it's a contraction of 'it is')

Journal #12: "How I'm Learning English"


I told you how I watched the movie "Shrek" at last journal.


I told you how I watched the movie "Shrek" atin my last journal.

"At" is more for a place. "In my" is correct in this instance.

I told you how I watched the movie "Shrek" atin my last journal.

I forgot to tell you about one more English serial.


I forgot to tell you about one more English seriales.

I forgot to tell you about one more English seriales.

It name is "Blue Mountain State".


It's name is "Blue Mountain State".

Its name is "Blue Mountain State".

I started to watch it at last weekend.


I started to watch it at last weekend.

No need for the "at".

I started to watch it aing it last weekend.

I saw first three series.


I saw the first three series.

I think you mean episodes?

I saw the first three seriepisodes.

Series is for the whole show, episode is for each smaller part.

It was so funny and giggle.


It was so funny and giggle.

To giggle is a verb to laugh in a girlish way.

It was so funny and I giggled.

Giggled is like a small laugh, maybe "I laughed" would be more natural ;)

I think I can't told about the story or some interesting moments, because it's PG-16.


I don't think I can't told tell you about the story or some interesting moments, from it because it's PG-16.

I think I can't toldell you about the story or some of the interesting moments, because it's PG-16.

So, if you want to watch this serial, you're welcome.


So, if you want to watch this seriales, you're welcome. to!

So, if you want to watch this seriales, you're welcome.

You can find this in intenet.


You can find this init on the internet.

You can find this init on the internet.

Thanks for raeading my journal.


Thanks for raeading my journal.

Thanks for raeading my journal.

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