Nov. 8, 2020
Journal 11/8/20
I want to talk about the experience of buying a leather coat. I want to buy a leather coat very early, but because of its high price, I have never been willing to buy one. A couple of days ago, I decided to buy it online. When they arrived, I tried them immediately. The sleeve length and shoulder width are suitable enough, but the coat vertical length is very short. If you choose a suitable vertical length, then it feels very wide and fat on me, so I have to return them. Afterwards, I went to several entity stores to try it on in person, but they are almost in the same situation. In addition to these, there are three disadvantages I think that the leather coat has: first of all, when you sit down with a leather coat, where in front of your belly will balloon out. Secondly, the leather coat doesn't smell good and it feels cold when you touch it. Third, when your neck touches the collar it feels very uncomfortable: hard and cold. Anyway, I think cotton clothes are more comfortable because they have soft and warm feelings, so up to now, I still haven't finished buying my leather coat.
I want to talk about the experience of buying a leather coat.
I have wanted to buy a leather coat since very early on, but because of its high price, I have never been willing to buy one.
Not sure if this was the original intent of the sentence.
A couple of days ago, I decided to buy itone online.
When they arrived, I tried them immediately.
The sleeve length and shoulder width are suitable enough, but the coat's vertical length is very short.
If you choose a suitable vertical length, then it feels very wide and fatbig on me, so I have to return them.
The original sentence is not grammatically incorrect but it sounds a bit unnatural.
Afterwards, I went to several entity stores to try it on in person, but they are almost in the same situation.
In addition to these, there are three disadvantages that I think that the leather coat has: first of all, when you sit down with a leather coat, wther place in front of your belly will balloon out.
Secondly, the leather coat doesn't smell good and it feels cold when you touch it.
Third, when your neck touches the collar it feels very uncomfortable: hard and cold.
Anyway, I think cotton clothes are more comfortable because they havefeel soft and warm feelings, so up to now, I still haven't finished buying mydon't have a leather coat.
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I want to talk about the experience of buying a leather coat. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to buy a leather coat very early, but because of its high price, I have never been willing to buy one. I have wanted to buy a leather coat since very early on, but because of its high price, I have never been willing to buy one. Not sure if this was the original intent of the sentence. |
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A couple of days ago, I decided to buy it online. A couple of days ago, I decided to buy |
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When they arrived, I tried them immediately. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The sleeve length and shoulder width are suitable enough, but the coat vertical length is very short. The sleeve length and shoulder width are suitable enough, but the coat's vertical length is very short. |
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If you choose a suitable vertical length, then it feels very wide and fat on me, so I have to return them. If you choose a suitable vertical length The original sentence is not grammatically incorrect but it sounds a bit unnatural. |
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Afterwards, I went to several entity stores to try it on in person, but they are almost in the same situation. Afterwards, I went to several |
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In addition to these, there are three disadvantages I think that the leather coat has: first of all, when you sit down with a leather coat, where in front of your belly will balloon out. In addition to these, there are three disadvantages that I think |
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Secondly, the leather coat doesn't smell good and it feels cold when you touch it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Third, when your neck touches the collar it feels very uncomfortable: hard and cold. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Anyway, I think cotton clothes are more comfortable because they have soft and warm feelings, so up to now, I still haven't finished buying my leather coat. Anyway, I think cotton clothes are more comfortable because they |
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