Nov. 7, 2020
Journal 11/7/20
Today is the traditional Chinese solar term Lidong, which means the beginning of the winter. But the weather today is so nice, sunny, warm and the temperature has reached high to 23 degrees Celsius. My office is in the southeast corner of the building and the two sides are set with a whole glass French window. You can imagine how you feel when you sit in the office during a sunny day: it is very hot! Fortunately, the two windows both had a big curtain, so I had to draw the curtain, then I could feel a bit comfortable.
Journal 11/7/20
Today is the traditional Chinese solar term Lidong, which meanarks the beginning of the winter.
ButDespite this, the weather today is so nice, sunny, warm and the temperature has reached a high tof 23 degrees Celsius.
My office is in the southeast corner of the building and the two sides are set with a whole glass French window.
You can imagine how youit feel when yous to sit in the office during a sunny day: it is very hot!
Fortunately, the two windows both hadve a big curtain, so I had tocan draw the curtain, then I coulm to keep the temperature down and feel a bit more comfortable.
Feedback
You did a wonderful job describing your office. Personally, sitting in a warm, brightly-lit room always makes me sleepy! As your journal was quite easy for me to understand and follow, most of my corrections are focused on helping your sentences flow better. I hope you have a nice rest of your day :)
Nov. 7, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and comments. Thank you very much.
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Journal 11/7/20 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today is the traditional Chinese solar term Lidong, which means the beginning of the winter. Today is the traditional Chinese solar term Lidong, which m |
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But the weather today is so nice, sunny, warm and the temperature has reached high to 23 degrees Celsius.
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My office is in the southeast corner of the building and the two sides are set with a whole glass French window. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You can imagine how you feel when you sit in the office during a sunny day: it is very hot! You can imagine how |
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Fortunately, the two windows both had a big curtain, so I had to draw the curtain, then I could feel a bit comfortable. Fortunately, the two windows both ha |
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