Nov. 5, 2020
Journal 11/5/20
Although electric commerce is very developed nowadays, some stuff is still not suitable to buy online. What impressed me the most was buying clothes. I have tried to buy them online, but every time I am almost unsatisfied and I have to return them. Sometimes it is because of the cloth materials, sometimes it is because of their size. For example, I bought a leather coat a couple of days ago. When I received it, I found that the sleeve length and shoulder width are very suitable enough, but the clothes length is short and I feel very tight when you wear it. After several times trying, I almost gave up buying clothes online. Do you have the experience of buying clothes online and what do you think about that?
Journal 11/5/20
Although electriconline commerce is very developed nowadays, some stuff iit's still not suitable to buy some stuff online.
What impressed me the most was buying clothes.
'impressed me' means that it was a positive experience for you.
I have tried to buy them online, but every time I am almost unsatisfied and I have to return them.
Sometimes it is because of the cloth materials, sometimes it is because of their size.
For example, I bought a leather coat a couple of days ago.
When I received it, I found that the sleeve length and shoulder width ware very suitable enough, but the clotheoat's length is short and Iit feels very tight on me when youI wear it.
Clothes is plural here.
Not sure how to explain, but it's not you that is feeling tight. It's the clothing that makes you feel tight.
After trying several times trying, I almost gave up buying clothes online.
Do you have the experience of buyingHave you bought clothes online and what do you think about that?
'Have you had the experience of buying clothes online' would make grammatical sense too.
I've corrected it to what I think is natural.
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Nice job! I was a bit picky with my corrections.
I've never bought clothes online. But I've heard that some stores offer free returns, so I guess that makes it a bit better..?
Nov. 5, 2020
What impressed me the most was buying clothes.
Then, what is the right explanation?
Nov. 5, 2020
Yes they offer free returns but buying clothes online will have many troubles. Thank you for your correction, thank you very much.
Nov. 5, 2020
What impressed me the most was buying clothes.
What left me bad impression was buying clothes.
Nov. 5, 2020
Oops sorry! I forgot to correct this:
"What impressed me the most was buying clothes."
Since your sentence before was this:
Although electric commerce is very developed nowadays, some stuff is still not suitable to buy online.
I would write this:
"One such example, is buying clothes"
Or, "For instance, buying clothes online did not impress me"
Nov. 5, 2020
Thank you very much.
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Journal 11/5/20 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Although electric commerce is very developed nowadays, some stuff is still not suitable to buy online. Although |
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What impressed me the most was buying clothes. What impressed me the most was buying clothes. 'impressed me' means that it was a positive experience for you. |
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I have tried to buy them online, but every time I am almost unsatisfied and I have to return them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Sometimes it is because of the cloth materials, sometimes it is because of their size. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For example, I bought a leather coat a couple of days ago. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I received it, I found that the sleeve length and shoulder width are very suitable enough, but the clothes length is short and I feel very tight when you wear it. When I received it, I found that the sleeve length and shoulder width ware Clothes is plural here. Not sure how to explain, but it's not you that is feeling tight. It's the clothing that makes you feel tight. |
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After several times trying, I almost gave up buying clothes online. After trying several times |
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Do you have the experience of buying clothes online and what do you think about that?
'Have you had the experience of buying clothes online' would make grammatical sense too. I've corrected it to what I think is natural. |
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