Nov. 30, 2020
These days, the lowest temperature has reached 1 degrees Celsius, and you feel very cold when you wear autumn clothes. I think it would be time to wear cotton shoes and down jackets, but it doesn’t snow now. If I wore a pair of cotton shoes, I don’t know if I would look strange. But finally I didn’t care about this, I just wore them on, and I felt warmer immediately.
Journal 11/30/20
These days, the lowest temperature has reached 1 degrees Celsius, and you feel very cold (even) when you wear autumn clothes.
A) 1 degree is singular
B) Not sure what you mean here, as written it sounds like you mean you feel cold because you are wearing autumn clothes.
I think it would be time to wear cotton shoes and down jackets, but it doeisn’'t snowing now.
I don't know what you mean by cotton shoes here. Cotton shoes are a summer item and would get soaking wet in snow. Do you mean rubber shoes / boots / insulated shoes?
If I wore a pair of cotton shoes, I don’t know if I would look strange.
But finally I didn’t care about this, I just wore themput on, and I felt warmer immediately.
or:
But finally I didn’t care about this, I just wore them, and I felt warmer immediately.
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These days, the lowest temperature has reached 1 degrees Celsius, and you feel very cold when you wear autumn clothes. These days, the lowest temperature has reached 1 degree A) 1 degree is singular B) Not sure what you mean here, as written it sounds like you mean you feel cold because you are wearing autumn clothes. |
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I think it would be time to wear cotton shoes and down jackets, but it doesn’t snow now. I think it would be time to wear cotton shoes and down jackets, but it I don't know what you mean by cotton shoes here. Cotton shoes are a summer item and would get soaking wet in snow. Do you mean rubber shoes / boots / insulated shoes? |
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If I wore a pair of cotton shoes, I don’t know if I would look strange. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But finally I didn’t care about this, I just wore them on, and I felt warmer immediately. But finally I didn’t care about this, I just or: But finally I didn’t care about this, I just wore them, and I felt warmer immediately. |
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