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Jack

Nov. 29, 2020

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Journal 11/29/20

After a couple of rainy days, this morning the sun was finally out. Although it was a little foggy, the sunshine was bright enough, and the temperature also raised a bit. I went out to walk around to enjoy the nice weather. When I passed by a farmer’s market, I bought a piece of ginger. The seller told me that the ginger price was 16 CN yuan per kilogram, and that piece of ginger was almost 0.5 kilogram, so I paid her 7 CN yuan. In the end, I found on my phone that I had taken a walk 2.3 kilometers long. Now I am sitting on my couch and writing this journal. Haha, it is done.

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After a couple of rainy days, this morning the sun was finally out.came out this morning.

Although it was still a little foggy, the sunshine was bright enough,nevertheless bright and the temperature also raised a bit.was warmer.

I went out to walk aroundfor a walk to enjoy the nice weather.

When I passed by a farmer’s market, I bought a piece of ginger.

The seller told me that the price of the ginger price was 16 CN yuan per kilogram, and thate piece of gingerI bought was almost 0.5 kilogram, which meanso I paid her 7 CN yuan.

In the end, I found on my phone that I had taken a walkAfter my walk, my phone indicated that I had completed 2.3 kilometers long.

Now I am sitting on my couch and writing this journal.

Haha, it is done.

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Jack

Nov. 29, 2020

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Thank you very much.

Journal 11/29/20


After a couple of rainy days, this morning the sun was finally out.


After a couple of rainy days, this morning the sun was finally out.came out this morning.

Although it was a little foggy, the sunshine was bright enough, and the temperature also raised a bit.


Although it was still a little foggy, the sunshine was bright enough,nevertheless bright and the temperature also raised a bit.was warmer.

I went out to walk around to enjoy the nice weather.


I went out to walk aroundfor a walk to enjoy the nice weather.

When I passed by a farmer’s market, I bought a piece of ginger.


When I passed by a farmer’s market, I bought a piece of ginger.

The seller told me that the ginger price was 16 CN yuan per kilogram, and that piece of ginger was almost 0.5 kilogram, so I paid her 7 CN yuan.


The seller told me that the price of the ginger price was 16 CN yuan per kilogram, and thate piece of gingerI bought was almost 0.5 kilogram, which meanso I paid her 7 CN yuan.

In the end, I found on my phone that I had taken a walk 2.3 kilometers long.


In the end, I found on my phone that I had taken a walkAfter my walk, my phone indicated that I had completed 2.3 kilometers long.

Now I am sitting on my couch and writing this journal.


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Haha, it is done.


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