Nov. 29, 2020
Journal 11/29/20
From now on, maybe I can’t go to work by bike again, because the weather is too cold. Now it is 4 degrees Celsius, and I feel like I can’t stand it. I always want to bike to work, but on cold days, riding a bicycle is really suffering. Tomorrow will be the last day I bike to work, because my car is not at my place. After work tomorrow afternoon, I can get my car back, so the day after tomorrow, I will drive to work.
Journal 11/29/20
From now on, maybe I can’I may not go to work by by bike agaifrom now on, because the weather is too cold.
Now it is 4 degrees Celsius, and I feel like I Just can’t stand it.
“It is” is commonly written as “it’s”.
I always want to bike to work, but on cold days, riding a bicycle is really sufferinga punishment.
Tomorrow will be the last day I bike to work, because my car is not at my placeI don’t have my car.
After work tTomorrow afternoon, I can get my car back after work, so the day after tomorrow, I will drive to work.
“I will” is commonly written as “I’ll”.
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Nov. 29, 2020
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From now on, maybe I can’t go to work by bike again, because the weather is too cold.
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Now it is 4 degrees Celsius, and I feel like I can’t stand it. Now it is 4 degrees Celsius, and I feel like I Just can’t stand it. “It is” is commonly written as “it’s”. |
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I always want to bike to work, but on cold days, riding a bicycle is really suffering. I always want to bike to work, but on cold days |
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Tomorrow will be the last day I bike to work, because my car is not at my place. Tomorrow will be the last day I bike to work, because |
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After work tomorrow afternoon, I can get my car back, so the day after tomorrow, I will drive to work.
“I will” is commonly written as “I’ll”. |
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