Nov. 27, 2020
Journal 11/27/20
Today is November 27, and our whole year’s work is complete. The following work is to receive various departments’ inspections. In recent periods, the main work we should do is to improve the data and organize the data. These kinds of work will take us half or one month. We hope our work that has finished will be accepted by each lead department.
Journal 11/27/20
Today is November 27, and oura whole year’s's worth of work is complete.
The following workOur next job is to receive various departments’ inspections.
I used "our" because you used words like we and us when talking about the project before.
In rRecent periods, the main work we should do isly, our main task has been to improve the data and organize the data.
Your sentence makes sense but I just corrected it to make it more concise and "flow" better.
Theseis kinds of work will take us half or one montha month to one month to complete.
"These kinds" is the only thing grammatically incorrect. "Half a month to a month to complete" is just a more natural phrase.
We hope our work that has finished will be accepted by each(the leader of each department/each of the lead departments).
I wasn't sure if each lead department was referring to an entire department of the leader of each department.
Nov. 27, 2020
Each of the lead departments. Thank you very much.
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Journal 11/27/20 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today is November 27, and our whole year’s work is complete. Today is November 27, and |
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The following work is to receive various departments’ inspections.
I used "our" because you used words like we and us when talking about the project before. |
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In recent periods, the main work we should do is to improve the data and organize the data.
Your sentence makes sense but I just corrected it to make it more concise and "flow" better. |
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These kinds of work will take us half or one month. Th "These kinds" is the only thing grammatically incorrect. "Half a month to a month to complete" is just a more natural phrase. |
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We hope our work that has finished will be accepted by each lead department. We hope our work that has finished will be accepted by I wasn't sure if each lead department was referring to an entire department of the leader of each department. |
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