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Journal 11/26/20

When you do things you like and without any fame or money reason, generally you can do it perfectly and feel very enjoy full.

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Journal 11/26/20

When you do things you like and, without anyseeking fame nor money reason, generally you can do it perfectly and feel very enjoy fullto a high standard and enjoy doing it.

There's an issue with "like" at the start and "enjoy" at the end: they basically mean the same thing, which makes the writing awkward.

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Dec. 25, 2020

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I got it. Thank you very much.

Journal 11/26/20

When you do somethings because you like it and without anynot for fame or money reason,, you can generally you can do it perfectly and feel verydo it really well and enjoy it fully.

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Nov. 26, 2020

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When you do something because you like it and not for fame or money, you can generally do it well and enjoy it fully. Thank you very much.

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When you do things you like and without any fame or money reason, generally you can do it perfectly and feel very enjoy full.


When you do somethings because you like it and without anynot for fame or money reason,, you can generally you can do it perfectly and feel verydo it really well and enjoy it fully.

When you do things you like and, without anyseeking fame nor money reason, generally you can do it perfectly and feel very enjoy fullto a high standard and enjoy doing it.

There's an issue with "like" at the start and "enjoy" at the end: they basically mean the same thing, which makes the writing awkward.

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