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Nov. 26, 2020

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Journal 11/26/20

Now, the temperature outside is between 4 to 7 degrees Celsius. You feel a bit colder when you stand outside, and your nose will run a little. But when you get on the high speed train, it is pretty warmer. I estimate that the temperature on the train is at least more than 20 degrees Celsius, and you feel really comfortable. An hour trip will pass quickly, then I arrive at my home city.

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Journal 11/26/20

Now, the temperature outside is between 4 to 7 degrees Celsius.

You feel a bit colder when you stand outside, and your nose will run a little.

But when you get on the high speed train, it is prettymuch warmer.

I estimate that the temperature on the train is at least more than 20 degrees Celsius, and you feel really comfortable.

"at least" or "more" not both: "... is at least 20 degrees ..." or "... is more than 20 degrees ..."

An hour trip will pass quickly, then I arrive at my home city.

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Jack

Nov. 26, 2020

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Thank you very much.

Journal 11/26/20


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Now, the temperature outside is between 4 to 7 degrees Celsius.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You feel a bit colder when you stand outside, and your nose will run a little.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But when you get on the high speed train, it is pretty warmer.


But when you get on the high speed train, it is prettymuch warmer.

I estimate that the temperature on the train is at least more than 20 degrees Celsius, and you feel really comfortable.


I estimate that the temperature on the train is at least more than 20 degrees Celsius, and you feel really comfortable.

"at least" or "more" not both: "... is at least 20 degrees ..." or "... is more than 20 degrees ..."

An hour trip will pass quickly, then I arrive at my home city.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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