Nov. 26, 2020
Journal 11/26/20
When winter comes, I don't know why the sky is always foggy. People on foggy days usually have bad moods. I like spring and autumn. In the two seasons, the sky is bright and clear, and they can bring you good moods. The temperature is also nice. They have a temperature between 15 to 25 degrees Celsius and these range degrees make people feel so nice. By the way, how about the weather in your country? I really want to know about it.
Journal 11/26/20
When winter comes, I don't know why the sky is always foggy when winter comes.
In the original position, “when winter comes” modifies “I don’t know,” which makes less sense.
People oOn foggy days, people usually have bad moods.
I like spring and autumn.
In those two seasons, the sky is bright and clear, and they can bring you good moods.
“Those” sounds better to me.
The temperature is also nice.
They have a temperatures between 15 to 25 degrees Celsius, and these range degrees make people feel so nicat temperature range feels pleasant to people.
This wording sounds better for me. “Makes people feel nice” is grammatical, but “nice” isn’t really a feeling that people feel (unless you mean that they’ve decided to be nice).
By the way, how aboutis the weather in your country?
“How about” is grammatical but doesn’t sound as good in this context to me.
I really want to know about it.
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Journal 11/26/20 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When winter comes, I don't know why the sky is always foggy.
In the original position, “when winter comes” modifies “I don’t know,” which makes less sense. |
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People on foggy days usually have bad moods.
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I like spring and autumn. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the two seasons, the sky is bright and clear, and they can bring you good moods. In those two seasons, the sky is bright and clear, and they can bring you good moods. “Those” sounds better to me. |
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The temperature is also nice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They have a temperature between 15 to 25 degrees Celsius and these range degrees make people feel so nice. They have This wording sounds better for me. “Makes people feel nice” is grammatical, but “nice” isn’t really a feeling that people feel (unless you mean that they’ve decided to be nice). |
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By the way, how about the weather in your country? By the way, how “How about” is grammatical but doesn’t sound as good in this context to me. |
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I really want to know about it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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